Music
Love...12 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image.
-Syllable count is good.
-I like the use of one continuous thought.
-Your poem shows how well
your mother sang, and uses
'breath' as a good example of
air, as required by the prompt.
-A good entry; good luck.
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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-Good image.
-Syllable count is good.
-I like the use of one continuous thought.
-Your poem shows how well
your mother sang, and uses
'breath' as a good example of
air, as required by the prompt.
-A good entry; good luck.
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thank y ou so much for the nice review, I really appreciate it.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a sweet, loving and sentimental write for the 'air' competition and is a great play on words, I wish you luck, it is a favourite for me, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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This is a sweet, loving and sentimental write for the 'air' competition and is a great play on words, I wish you luck, it is a favourite for me, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much. I really admire the opinion of someone whose work I admire.
