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Soar like the wind

Feel it, hear it.

10 total reviews 
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 3-5-3, Soar Like the Wind, uses those eleven syllables to capture the expected thrill and proximal breeze when the big bird swoops. Nice.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
    Thanks Bill.
Comment from Susan B. Lamphier
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Perfect use of graphics and words to describe the feel of the wind on wing. There is great imagery here. The selection of eagles is a powerful choice. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
    Many thanks for your comments
Comment from Debbie Pope
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Beautiful image here. You used each syllable so well. I can hear the "woosh" of the "wind." Good job. And, very artfully displayed. Good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
    Thanks Debbie
Comment from angel123
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I really like your nature poem. It flows well with the good alliteration of w, letters, and sounds. I also like your artwork choice. It goes well with your message. Best wishes!

Angel123

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
    Many thanks for your comments
Comment from Sherman541
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Very nicely written and beautiful picture. Especially the woosh, wind and wings, great choice of words. Good Luck and Best Wishes in the Contest! Sherman541

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
    Thank you so much. So pleased you liked it.
reply by Sherman541 on 07-Feb-2018
    you are very welcome
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written 3-5-3 poem you have penned for the 3-5-3 'Air' Poem writing prompt entry. I love the words and the art work of the eagle! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
    Many thanks.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks flying into the air and feeling the loud rushing noise of the wind from the wings of eagles; well said, well done. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
    Many thanks.
Comment from rspoet
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This is a fine 3-5-3 poem and entry for the contest
excellent imagery of the eagle and the wind
from its mighty wings
Perfect picture to match and use of alliteration
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
    So glad you like it. Thank you so much.
Comment from R56Ma3
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How very uplifting and encouraging. The thought of being free is exactly what it means to me. Also carries strong message. Thanks for sharing. R56ma3

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
    Many thanks for your kind comments
reply by R56Ma3 on 06-Feb-2018
    Your welcome
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A pleasant nature write about the eagle in flight and I have never heard the sound, but I suppose we can imagine it, good luck with your poem, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
    Many thanks for reading and commenting..