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Love Never Dies

3-5-3 poem

7 total reviews 
Comment from BeasPeas
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I agree with you. Love doesn't die altogether. No matter the outcome, meaningful persons in our life have filled a purpose. Very nicely composed. Marilyn

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
    Thank you for your kind consideration.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This 3-5-3, Love Never Dies, uses those eleven syllables to recall with sight, smell, and hearing, the one who is gone, but not forgotten. Nice.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
    Your insights are much appreciated.
Comment from Susan B. Lamphier
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You've presented a mood of love and longing, and the graphics are perfect for your verse. A little punctuation would not be amiss, but that is cranky! Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
    Appreciate your dropping by to read and review.
Comment from Debbie Pope
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I am about to lose my mother, any day now. When it happens, I will remember your words. They are lovely and comforting. Thank you. Good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
    So glad this poem will give you some comfort. I actually was thinking of my mom when I wrote it . Lost her three years ago. Sweet memories keep her alive in my heart .
Comment from angel123
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The essence of your poem is beautiful and I enjoyed reading it. It flows well with sentiments of love and your artwork choice goes well with your message. Best wishes!

Angel123

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
    Thank you for your insights!
Comment from zanya
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A tribute to a special person - a beloved here in this 3-5-3 Air Poem - within the confines of the format a sense of her presence lingering is effectively conveyed

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
    Thank you for your insightful review!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I love this entry for the contest, someone you love leaving their essence in the air so that their love remains, perfect words, I wish you luck, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2018

reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
    Thank you!