Deep Winter
3-5-3 Poetry9 total reviews
Comment from Susan B. Lamphier
Very good! Your words, so simple, are sublime! I find they are very descriptive, and the grasphic you use is spot on! Very well done! Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Very good! Your words, so simple, are sublime! I find they are very descriptive, and the grasphic you use is spot on! Very well done! Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the great review and comments. I really appreciate your feedback.
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Thank you for the great review and comments. I really appreciate your feedback.
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a lovely photo. I can't take my eyes off of it. (I love snow scenes so much more than beach scenes) Your words complement it perfectly. The words and photo together would be something that I would hang in my house. Good job.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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What a lovely photo. I can't take my eyes off of it. (I love snow scenes so much more than beach scenes) Your words complement it perfectly. The words and photo together would be something that I would hang in my house. Good job.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Thank you very much Debbie, for the good review and comments. Hope your winter is not too severe!
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Thank you very much Debbie, for the good review and comments. Hope your winter is not too severe!
Comment from angel123
I really like your well-written poem. It flows well and paints a picture on its own. I also like your artwork choice and message. Best wishes!
Angel123
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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I really like your well-written poem. It flows well and paints a picture on its own. I also like your artwork choice and message. Best wishes!
Angel123
Comment Written 08-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018
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Thanks so much for the good review and comments. I appreciate it.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about the deep winter frosted breath enfolds when the first rays of sunset glow to light up the grey areas into golden hues over the snow white fields.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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A very well-written 3-5-3 poem about the deep winter frosted breath enfolds when the first rays of sunset glow to light up the grey areas into golden hues over the snow white fields.
Comment Written 07-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thanks for the good review and comments.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your poem is uplifting and paints a warm sunset on a blanket of white, sheer joy to watch but not sure it can feel as warm as it looks! Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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Your poem is uplifting and paints a warm sunset on a blanket of white, sheer joy to watch but not sure it can feel as warm as it looks! Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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Thanks for the good review. It does look very cold, even with the glow. I appreciate your comments.
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Thanks for the good review. It does look very cold, even with the glow. I appreciate your comments.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Good image.
-Syllable count is good.
-Effective use of one continuous thought.
-Vivid imagery and use of personification in line two.
-A good entry.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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-Good image.
-Syllable count is good.
-Effective use of one continuous thought.
-Vivid imagery and use of personification in line two.
-A good entry.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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Thank you for the great review. I appreciate your evaluation.
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Thank you for the great review. I appreciate your evaluation.
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You are very welcome.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3 poem, Deep Winter, follows the format and creates a majestic scene of a rising, morning sun meeting the welcoming, frozen world. These few words 'embrace' the readers' imaginations.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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This 3-5-3 poem, Deep Winter, follows the format and creates a majestic scene of a rising, morning sun meeting the welcoming, frozen world. These few words 'embrace' the readers' imaginations.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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Thanks so much for the good review. I wrote the verse then found the photo. I hoped it fit well, at least it did with me. Thanks again!
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Thanks so much for the good review. I wrote the verse then found the photo. I hoped it fit well, at least it did with me. Thanks again!
Comment from fastdigits
In but eleven syllables you have painted this majestic portrait of a winter's sunset in artistic phrasing of words that tumble down the page in frosted breath.
Well done
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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In but eleven syllables you have painted this majestic portrait of a winter's sunset in artistic phrasing of words that tumble down the page in frosted breath.
Well done
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your comments and review. I wrote it first and then found the photo, but I thought it was an enhancement. Regards!
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a pretty 3-5-3 poem of the frosted air, my friend. A beautiful picture to accompany it. Good luck in the contest. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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This is a pretty 3-5-3 poem of the frosted air, my friend. A beautiful picture to accompany it. Good luck in the contest. ~Kerry
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your good comments and review!
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My pleasure:)
