haiku (the orange day fades)
5-7-5 haiku for contest6 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, The Orange Day Fades, with its seventeen syllables, pictures the burnt orange day, spent and still, as all stops and fades. Nice.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
This haiku, The Orange Day Fades, with its seventeen syllables, pictures the burnt orange day, spent and still, as all stops and fades. Nice.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my haiku.
Comment from Debbie Pope
What a beautiful haiku. I love the photo with the sunset hanging over the city.The orange is fading as it should (that's the part of the poem that I like). And then sleep. How calming. Excellent job.
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
What a beautiful haiku. I love the photo with the sunset hanging over the city.The orange is fading as it should (that's the part of the poem that I like). And then sleep. How calming. Excellent job.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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I appreciate your lovely review. Thank you
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks orange day fades at the sunset skies and darkens the horizon and the world goes slow and sleeps thereafter; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
This speaks orange day fades at the sunset skies and darkens the horizon and the world goes slow and sleeps thereafter; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this with us; good luck with the contest. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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I appreciate your lovely review. Thank you
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written and beautiful haiku about the beautiful sunset. You used very good descriptive words and great imagery from the art work! Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
This is a very well written and beautiful haiku about the beautiful sunset. You used very good descriptive words and great imagery from the art work! Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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I appreciate your lovely review. Thank you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your poem has painted a picture of a sunset slowly descending leaving us in darkness, full of colour and atmospherics, best of luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
Your poem has painted a picture of a sunset slowly descending leaving us in darkness, full of colour and atmospherics, best of luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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I appreciate your lovely review. Thank you
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Sunset Haiku writing prompt.
Well said in your few well chosen words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
I think this is a good entry for the Sunset Haiku writing prompt.
Well said in your few well chosen words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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I appreciate your lovely review. Thank you