Where's that ditty?
a contest entry3 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This senryu about yourself, Where's That Ditty?, uses seventeen syllables to announce, seemingly, that you have used up your muse. I dig it. (Sorry)
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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This senryu about yourself, Where's That Ditty?, uses seventeen syllables to announce, seemingly, that you have used up your muse. I dig it. (Sorry)
Comment Written 09-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2018
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Hi Bill, thank you my friend, glad you stopped by; have a wonderful weekend.
Comment from tfawcus
Very good! I like the concept but had a moment's hesitation over the last line. I wondered if it meant 'depth did us part' or 'depth split us apart.'. At the moment it seems to fall between the two. I enjoyed the pun anyway!
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Very good! I like the concept but had a moment's hesitation over the last line. I wondered if it meant 'depth did us part' or 'depth split us apart.'. At the moment it seems to fall between the two. I enjoyed the pun anyway!
Comment Written 05-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Hello friend, glad you stopped by and I appreciate your time and the encouraging review, thank you very much.
Comment from ScarletAffliction
Hahaha! I had a good chuckle at this one myself. I really enjoyed the picture combined with the clever poem. You did a nice job here. ;)
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Hahaha! I had a good chuckle at this one myself. I really enjoyed the picture combined with the clever poem. You did a nice job here. ;)
Comment Written 05-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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I am pleased you like the write; appreciate your time and the kind comments; thank you very much.
