Happiness at last
Finding love after heartbreak10 total reviews
Comment from Dr. Nad
This is an excellent poem that not only met the criteria for the contest, but this expresses succinctly the thoughts and sentiments of many of your readers. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
This is an excellent poem that not only met the criteria for the contest, but this expresses succinctly the thoughts and sentiments of many of your readers. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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Thanks again. I really appreciated your great comments and six stars. Blessings Jen.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello jenintorre
all in just eight words is so true of how one can find happiness when you find one who meet the right person
Made your life start anew
Gert
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
Hello jenintorre
all in just eight words is so true of how one can find happiness when you find one who meet the right person
Made your life start anew
Gert
Comment Written 03-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Thank you.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 1-6-1 poem. When w finally find someone who loves us as much as we love them it is a true blessing and we should not let the opportunity goes by.
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
A very well-written 1-6-1 poem. When w finally find someone who loves us as much as we love them it is a true blessing and we should not let the opportunity goes by.
Comment Written 03-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from Jean Lutz
So few words to tell such a big story. Artwork and color scheme chosen are perfect compliments. I wish you well with the entry. I am unsure is your second line is counted as five or six words.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
So few words to tell such a big story. Artwork and color scheme chosen are perfect compliments. I wish you well with the entry. I am unsure is your second line is counted as five or six words.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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Many thanks
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I realized on my next review that it was syllables -- not words. You are spot on. Best of luck.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Simple words with a new start for love, the heart has the capacity to forgive and love again, wise words and I wish you luck with the contest, and uplifting poem, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
Simple words with a new start for love, the heart has the capacity to forgive and love again, wise words and I wish you luck with the contest, and uplifting poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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Thanks a lot Dolly, my friend. X
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good entry for the 'Rhyme That 1-6-1' writing prompt.
Well told in so few words.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
This is a good entry for the 'Rhyme That 1-6-1' writing prompt.
Well told in so few words.
Good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from Julie Pie
This poem is well written and captures the feeling of finding love after being hurt. The work True at the end is especially powerful, it expresses the feeling of finding genuine feelings again after suffering a heartbreak where the feelings did not last.
Nice work, good luck in the contest!
Julie
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
This poem is well written and captures the feeling of finding love after being hurt. The work True at the end is especially powerful, it expresses the feeling of finding genuine feelings again after suffering a heartbreak where the feelings did not last.
Nice work, good luck in the contest!
Julie
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from Lloyd T. Okoko
An excellent 1-6-1 poetry contest entry with syllable and rhyme compliant inputs.
The work constitutes an affirmation of the fact that someone indeed made his life start afresh.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
An excellent 1-6-1 poetry contest entry with syllable and rhyme compliant inputs.
The work constitutes an affirmation of the fact that someone indeed made his life start afresh.
Excellent work! Keep the flag flying!
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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Many thanks
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Remain Blessed!
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is just in time for Valentine's Day. Do you mind if I steal it? I'll return it as through as I'm done. This is a great contest entry and should do very well.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
This is just in time for Valentine's Day. Do you mind if I steal it? I'll return it as through as I'm done. This is a great contest entry and should do very well.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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Of course you can steal it. Only 4? Thanks.
Comment from James H. Oldfield
Very good, works really well.
I'd been really interested to see what came out, based on what looks an especially difficult challenge, and this is another very impressive entry.
Great job, and best of luck in the contest.
Take care.
-James
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
Very good, works really well.
I'd been really interested to see what came out, based on what looks an especially difficult challenge, and this is another very impressive entry.
Great job, and best of luck in the contest.
Take care.
-James
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much James for your great review.