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We Hold These Truths

Lest we forget...

14 total reviews 
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Love these words and agree with them, these Tetractys poems are little gems and I enjoyed your contribution, I wish you luck with this contest, well chosen words here and your poem has something important to say, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
    Hello Dolly!
    I am so late responding to your review!
    Thank you ever so much; to my amazement, it won the contest!

    Take Care,
    diane
reply by Dolly'sPoems on 13-Feb-2018
    Well done Diane, well deserved, love Dolly x
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Good image.
-Syllable count is good.
-A good topic and message in
your poem.
-We should always take care to
protect our beliefs, rights, etc.
-A good entry; good luck.
-You might want to re-consider
the identifying marks, as I am
not sure they are allowed in a contest.

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
    Hello Pam!
    Thank you for your encouraging review!

    diane
reply by Pam (respa) on 13-Feb-2018
    You are very welcome, Diane. Congratulations on the win! A deserving poem.
Comment from jenintorre
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This is a very good tetractys poem and a good entry for the contest. The message that it portrays is so true and you have chosen a very apt illustration.

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 Comment Written 02-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
    Hello jenintorre!
    Thank you for your complimentary review!
    Very appreciated!

    diane
Comment from Sharon Meda
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Tetractys Poem' writing prompt.
Well said in your few words. Your meaning is clear.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 02-Feb-2018


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2018
    Hello Sharon!
    So pleased you enjoyed!

    diane