Bittersweet Revenge
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Discovering the Truth"She's back ready for revenge.
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Mistydawn
I actually had to slow down recuse this chapter
had me in a rush to see what was coming up next
You have a great way to lead me to believe it's not Rachel who is not the killer THEN with the
part where (I believe that Bonnie the killer is surfing through channels, trying to find something to watch. Her dinner is cooling on a tray in front of her. I wonder if my work will make the evening news?
Gert
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Hello Mistydawn
I actually had to slow down recuse this chapter
had me in a rush to see what was coming up next
You have a great way to lead me to believe it's not Rachel who is not the killer THEN with the
part where (I believe that Bonnie the killer is surfing through channels, trying to find something to watch. Her dinner is cooling on a tray in front of her. I wonder if my work will make the evening news?
Gert
Comment Written 06-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review. You made my week. Your right it's not Rachel or Emma. You think it's Bonnie, Rachel's stepmom? Could be, lol. Just a few chapters to the end and then you'll know for sure.
Thank you so much for such a wonderful review, take care.
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You are so welcome Mistydawn.
Gert
Comment from apky
Oh you just went and hitched this up several notches, Misty. I'd though all along that Rachel was the evil doer. Now we know she isn't the murderess.
I'm wondering where this goes next and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
And have you notied there's nothing I've corrected? Bravo, my friend. You're getting better and better at this. Maybe I'll learn from you now to help me with LONDON SPARKS.
By the way, how do you use more than 1 lep certificate? I have dozens but can only use one at a time. How, for example, do you manage to give reviewers 10 or 14 points? Help me out, won't you?
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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Oh you just went and hitched this up several notches, Misty. I'd though all along that Rachel was the evil doer. Now we know she isn't the murderess.
I'm wondering where this goes next and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
And have you notied there's nothing I've corrected? Bravo, my friend. You're getting better and better at this. Maybe I'll learn from you now to help me with LONDON SPARKS.
By the way, how do you use more than 1 lep certificate? I have dozens but can only use one at a time. How, for example, do you manage to give reviewers 10 or 14 points? Help me out, won't you?
Comment Written 05-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for your fantastic review and your wonderful praise. You learn from me, that's a heck of a twist.
As far as using double lep I have no idea. I seldom use them. I usually Use the treasure chest and pumps to up my promotion. You could ask Phillis Stewart or do the contact us. The owner usually replies pretty quick.
Thanks again for all your help, support and friendship they mean a lot to me, take care.
Comment from royowen
Well our killer is going to get Rachel off the hook, for being arrested for the horrible crimes she has committed. The trouble at the moment, is that it looks like Rachel had the motive and opportunity, so of course they think they've got their "man". So well done, I think think the killer is about to make her only mistake. Well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Well our killer is going to get Rachel off the hook, for being arrested for the horrible crimes she has committed. The trouble at the moment, is that it looks like Rachel had the motive and opportunity, so of course they think they've got their "man". So well done, I think think the killer is about to make her only mistake. Well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your wonderful review and your kind words. No, the detectives are going to discover they made a mistake real soon. Your right the killer is about to make a huge error that's going to prove to be costly.
Thank you again for all your nice words and fantastic review and friendship, they mean a lot to me.
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Most welcome
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Good job at making the cops look foolish. Another killing while Rachel was being held by police. So they have to see she is not the killer and let her go. Who is this person, then. Another sibling who suffered with her, an older sister I think she said.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Good job at making the cops look foolish. Another killing while Rachel was being held by police. So they have to see she is not the killer and let her go. Who is this person, then. Another sibling who suffered with her, an older sister I think she said.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your wonderful review. Oh, Joe being the stubborn fool he is will say it's a copycat killing, later being forced to eat crow, which you know Jerry will love. Joe and Jerry have been in a lot of my stories so they almost seem real to me, almost like family. Rachel too.
Thank you again for all your support and encouragement, take care.
PS. forget the sibling angle, she has two younger sisters who were raised by Bonnie and Max, not Jeanie and they didn't suffer. The killer was mentioned a couple of times.
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Emma?
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Lol could be.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Well, it doesn't look like Rachel will be the main suspect for all these murders for long. LOL! Of course, there is a lot of evidence that will have to be explained. Great Chapter. :-)
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Well, it doesn't look like Rachel will be the main suspect for all these murders for long. LOL! Of course, there is a lot of evidence that will have to be explained. Great Chapter. :-)
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your kind review and all your support. Joe will soon find out that circumstantial evidence isn't always reliable. Of course, Jerry will love seeing him eat crow, lol. Torment him because of it, lol.
Thanks again for all your support, your friendship it means a lot to me, take care
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a realistic filmy, characters are real, plot has flow slow but steady with twists, thrilling, challenging, reach truth upon investigation, confession breaks through; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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This is a realistic filmy, characters are real, plot has flow slow but steady with twists, thrilling, challenging, reach truth upon investigation, confession breaks through; well said, well done. DR ALCREATOR.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review and kind words. It means a lot to me, take care.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
She jumps out of the darkness as he reaches the side of his truck. "You're going to hell," she yells, swinging the crowbar around.' WOW what an exciting, emotional and involving read. This is pretty darn amazing. I loved every minute. I always enjoy your writing so much. Well done kindest regards and best wishes. I look forward to reading more of your excellent work kind regards Meia x
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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She jumps out of the darkness as he reaches the side of his truck. "You're going to hell," she yells, swinging the crowbar around.' WOW what an exciting, emotional and involving read. This is pretty darn amazing. I loved every minute. I always enjoy your writing so much. Well done kindest regards and best wishes. I look forward to reading more of your excellent work kind regards Meia x
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Thank you so much for your wonderful, encouraging review. The Serial killer is on a mission. She wants to free the world of sexual predators, make sure other children don't have to go through what she did.
Thank you again for your wonderful review, take care.
Comment from giraffmang
Well, it's all kicking off now... lol
I found keys at Carlo's Rodriguez's crime scene - just Carlos here.
I wonder if my work will make the evening news.? - delete the full stop before the question mark.
how those horrible men use to treat you - used to.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Well, it's all kicking off now... lol
I found keys at Carlo's Rodriguez's crime scene - just Carlos here.
I wonder if my work will make the evening news.? - delete the full stop before the question mark.
how those horrible men use to treat you - used to.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2018
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Thank you again for another great review. Close to perfect, but no cigar, darn it. The evidence is really coming in. The last crime, the killer makes a very costly mistake. That's what happens when you get too confident, cocky. Do you have an idea who it is? You read so much it's probably hard to keep them all straight.
Thanks again for all your help and reviews, take care.
