love you
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Comment from DR DIP
What a truly beautiful song. Eva cassidy is a wonderful singer.
Are you dedicating this to me Michael?
For such an arrogant arsehole you write nice poetry. It's a shame you have been poisoned by your politics. I am sure deep down there was once a nice person inside.
As I have said you haven't posted anything new since april 2018.
Obviously too obsessed with your hero to worry about what this site is truly about.
I give this a five for content
"only buries treasure in troves of forever" favourite line.
A few spags and grammatical errors but seeing past that is a genuine well written poem.
lots of love uncle dip
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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What a truly beautiful song. Eva cassidy is a wonderful singer.
Are you dedicating this to me Michael?
For such an arrogant arsehole you write nice poetry. It's a shame you have been poisoned by your politics. I am sure deep down there was once a nice person inside.
As I have said you haven't posted anything new since april 2018.
Obviously too obsessed with your hero to worry about what this site is truly about.
I give this a five for content
"only buries treasure in troves of forever" favourite line.
A few spags and grammatical errors but seeing past that is a genuine well written poem.
lots of love uncle dip
Comment Written 02-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2020
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Was...she was a phenomenal voice. But she died...yet unrecognized but for anyone whoever heard her.
No...I had another woman in mind when I penned this..
.though I've been thinking of writing one about an asshole who actually speaks the sounds of shit...but I just dont want to go there...some butt holes are better looking unread, you know what i mean...?
Hey keep America away from bowel movements you here...before a bird shits on you.
Love Michael
Comment from tbacha58
I remembered you for a long time, as I left for three years. I read your name, and of course had the pleasure again to read your deep beautiful poetry, of course, this one must be exceptional. Beautiful. Hope you remember me. Terry.
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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I remembered you for a long time, as I left for three years. I read your name, and of course had the pleasure again to read your deep beautiful poetry, of course, this one must be exceptional. Beautiful. Hope you remember me. Terry.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Mar-2019
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Why thank you...
I think poetry emotive
usually derived from desires of both originator and second cousin to the experience. Either ive had to have known the moment or want it so bad I can see it.
In truth its hard to keep it...but you wouldn't miss it if it were everyday easy. Sorry I forget to check ...good to see you back. Love Michaela
Comment from Sharon Haiste
A lovely poem, well written.
Nice rhythm and flow. Nicely done.
And the video is lovely as well.
Thank you for sharing thus.
Sharon
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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A lovely poem, well written.
Nice rhythm and flow. Nicely done.
And the video is lovely as well.
Thank you for sharing thus.
Sharon
Comment Written 02-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018
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Hi Sharon...-smile-
why thank you...yes I love the song
I've written to it before..um Christine Mcvay's verision.
someone showed this rendition by Eva Cassidy, and I was moved
her story even more so effected me.....she died before she was really recognized.
thanks. always Michael
Comment from LIJ Red
Sounds like you are wooing a goddess. Or, again, you are into rushing metaphors way over my head. Blue eyes are caused by a pigment loss that broke out in Transylvania about the time of Abraham...excellent free verse.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Sounds like you are wooing a goddess. Or, again, you are into rushing metaphors way over my head. Blue eyes are caused by a pigment loss that broke out in Transylvania about the time of Abraham...excellent free verse.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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what is a goddess...
but her who sees you Adonis...though youre not.
she is worshiped above all but God by every Adam's design and desire.
I suppose. thanks man. always Michael
Comment from closetpoetjester
Well, Optimism IS my middle name haha.
Sirriusly Michael...stunning poem with poetically divine welcoming and open arms. Sometimes a leap of faith is all you need...or someone to prod you into leaping by putting a rocket under your ar...ahh never mind.
Your words are the vehicle of your emotions and your comfort zone is positively purring.
Home Sweet Home baby!
Loved this:
"alone never known"
You are cryptically alluring and spectacularly revealing all at the same time. Now THAT takes talent.
Gifted beyond measure you are.
Take a deep breath...and take in that sunshine and those blue blue skies...
I'm feelin' sixy
Sass
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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Well, Optimism IS my middle name haha.
Sirriusly Michael...stunning poem with poetically divine welcoming and open arms. Sometimes a leap of faith is all you need...or someone to prod you into leaping by putting a rocket under your ar...ahh never mind.
Your words are the vehicle of your emotions and your comfort zone is positively purring.
Home Sweet Home baby!
Loved this:
"alone never known"
You are cryptically alluring and spectacularly revealing all at the same time. Now THAT takes talent.
Gifted beyond measure you are.
Take a deep breath...and take in that sunshine and those blue blue skies...
I'm feelin' sixy
Sass
x
Comment Written 01-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018
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well i was feeling sixty before your pyrotechnics .....reminds me of when i was twelve.....-smile-
thank you sixy for kissing me special. I gotta go spin the wheel...see you. always Michael
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LOL Hey well I'ma nearly fifty so what's ten years between friends??...
I mean...
Just saying...LOL
Spin on
Comment from Joan E.
I was delighted to see your name pop up on my screen. I am glad you found the time to share your love poem with us. The mesmerizing picture is so parallel to your mood, which is perfectly expressed by the "pinned mittens" and "treasure in troves of forever". Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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I was delighted to see your name pop up on my screen. I am glad you found the time to share your love poem with us. The mesmerizing picture is so parallel to your mood, which is perfectly expressed by the "pinned mittens" and "treasure in troves of forever". Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 31-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Hi Joan ...of everywhere been there...-smile- how is my favorite French lesson...ahh you make me blush with all this gold dust ...people are gonna think youre crazy about me or something. I cant wait....-smile-...guess who
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I can't wait either--let the rumors fly! Big hugs and sweet dreams- Joan
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Night night my Mademoiselle....wish
Comment from MissMerri
First, thank you for that beautiful song. I loved listening to it. And second... thank you for sharing your beautiful love poem. It was moving, breathtaking, romantic, and in so many ways, utterly amazing. Let me see if I can recite the ways ... I love the way you paint such vivid visuals with only a few choice words. "pinned mittens to winter's warmth" is a prime example. "the air that's breathed when she is need satisfied" would be another excellent example. Then there is the undeniable emotional impact of your words. This is the part most difficult to explain, but certain phrases carry such a wallop to the heart. Example: "true love never cheapens, only buries treasure in troves of forever." Wow! I loved that! "wide as heaven's welcome" is another phrase packed with emotional meaning. Also, "home spells your name sweet." I think the poem as a whole is what moves the reader. Taking it apart doesn't really explain the impact at all, but I love the whole thing as a unit, and I love to see you writing! You are a poet who needs to express your heart. This was so touching. Thank you so much Michael, for giving us a treat. ~Meadow
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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First, thank you for that beautiful song. I loved listening to it. And second... thank you for sharing your beautiful love poem. It was moving, breathtaking, romantic, and in so many ways, utterly amazing. Let me see if I can recite the ways ... I love the way you paint such vivid visuals with only a few choice words. "pinned mittens to winter's warmth" is a prime example. "the air that's breathed when she is need satisfied" would be another excellent example. Then there is the undeniable emotional impact of your words. This is the part most difficult to explain, but certain phrases carry such a wallop to the heart. Example: "true love never cheapens, only buries treasure in troves of forever." Wow! I loved that! "wide as heaven's welcome" is another phrase packed with emotional meaning. Also, "home spells your name sweet." I think the poem as a whole is what moves the reader. Taking it apart doesn't really explain the impact at all, but I love the whole thing as a unit, and I love to see you writing! You are a poet who needs to express your heart. This was so touching. Thank you so much Michael, for giving us a treat. ~Meadow
Comment Written 31-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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you know Meadow I had a most disappointing day...
and then you...make it special memorable.
I love that you feel my poetry...happy Birthday. -smile-
always Michael
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I'm so sorry your day was not good. Thank you for the birthday wishes. You're very kind, even in this midst of disappointment.
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Meadow...I treasure every word you said. as much as knowing the gift of your peaceful embrace...you know that.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
wide as heavens welcome
wonder so much alive
in blue sky eyes...Truly beautiful and quite magical. All eye colours can be very beautiful but blue eyes look so much like the sky...so lovely this poem really was a joy to read...well done best regards and warmest wishes Meia x
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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wide as heavens welcome
wonder so much alive
in blue sky eyes...Truly beautiful and quite magical. All eye colours can be very beautiful but blue eyes look so much like the sky...so lovely this poem really was a joy to read...well done best regards and warmest wishes Meia x
Comment Written 31-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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Hi Meia...-smile-
yes...truly its not the color....its what they see.
thanks for enjoying. always Michael
Comment from mermaids
I love the lines "pinned mittens to winter's warmth" and "kittens purr forever". They create clear emotions and give the poem a good feeling. Excellent free verse form and use of words to convey love.
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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I love the lines "pinned mittens to winter's warmth" and "kittens purr forever". They create clear emotions and give the poem a good feeling. Excellent free verse form and use of words to convey love.
Comment Written 31-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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me too...
they signify something or one trusted safe.
appreciate your stop by. always Michael
Comment from Ricky1024
This is really well written As usual .
Great theme and imagery.
Rhymed very well.
Deeply embered to always be remembered.
This Love You" as if under some kind of spell.
Read well with no Grammar issues.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content.
Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Thanks for this...
Dr. Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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This is really well written As usual .
Great theme and imagery.
Rhymed very well.
Deeply embered to always be remembered.
This Love You" as if under some kind of spell.
Read well with no Grammar issues.
Adjective Content was aligned well with Objective Content.
Descriptive Measures aligned perfectly.
Thanks for this...
Dr. Ricky 1024
Comment Written 31-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018
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ah yes...its what I know.
hey Rick...-smile-....thanks for the thumbs up man.
yes deeply embedded, always remembered...is the beautiful in our lives.
appreciate you stopping by. always Michael
