Comment from jppoet

Excellent

This is a sweet and superb entry for this difficult contest requirement, but both your text and its sympathetic photo give me to wish you the best success . Blessings, john

 Comment Written 02-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2018

Thanks for that sweet review, John. I am going to keep working.

Comment from Whispering_ink

Excellent

This is great!! I attempted to do a 1-6-1 and struggled! I really like this one and wish you the best of luck in all your writing! And I look forward to reading more of your work!!

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018

Thank you, Whispering ink ( I love that name) You are kind.

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This one-six-one poem, The Kiss, explains, in its eight-syllable format, the power of that first osculation with a person of considerable interest. It was Yvonne.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018

Thanks, Bill.

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written 1-6-1 poem. We all can relate to this little poem. Our first kiss is a memory we for sure cannot forget, even if we don't have anymore contact with our first kisser.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2018

Thanks for reading my little poem.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Very smartly written onesixtyone, Debbie. Every time I read one of these beauties I am again reminded how much I genuinely enjoy them.

Terrific job and best wishes to you in the contest.

Gloria

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018

Thank you, Gloria. They are fun.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Ah, who could ever forget their first kiss, Debbie?
Lisa Davis, 1968, in the wooded area behind our housing development. She was nine, I was eight.
See what I mean?
I think this is a good entry for the 1-6-1 poetry prompt.
Very well done.
Good luck to you with the voting.
~Dean

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018

Thanks, Dean. Fifth grade for me.

reply by Dean Kuch on 31-Jan-2018

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

That first exploration in the adult kiss ... Seventh grade for me, I thought boys had cooties up until about the end of fifth grade lol. I liked the simplicity and beauty of this one. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018

Thank you.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Debbie, This is a very well written 1-6-1 poem you have penned for the prompt. You used very good wording and very good imagery with the art work. I remember mine was when I was in first grade of all things! lol I was so scared when I got home I told my mom a boy kissed me and I thought I was pregnant! She laughed so hard after comforting me. I was so upset with that silly guy! Best wishes with the prompt! love, Teri

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018

You knew about being pregnant in first grade? I am shocked, Teri. Thanks for the review.

Comment from Paws4FX

Excellent

Yes, first kisses are there in your heart forever. Good or bad it's always the one that keeps coming back. Funny word . . . reminisce. It just LOOKS strange. Good job!

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018

Thank you.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the '1-6-1 Poetry' writing prompt.
Well said in your few, well chosen words.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018

Thank you, Sharon.