Comment from MelB

Excellent

Hello, very nice aabb rhyme and rhythm. Great use of the question-statement format. The ending is my favorite - hope sings and healing wings.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018

Thanks Mel, for this great review and comments,

Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

It's not something I want to think about... But all this space talk in the news forces us to think about the end. I hope life of the human could live forever. Well thought out poem. Creative. Spiritual. You should add a bible quote. Still, great work :)

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018

Thanks Alicia, for this great review and comments,

Comment from TPAC

Excellent

Beautiful views, which makes its own music at heart. I do have a suggestion:
I still ponder how the world is to end;
will rescue come?
A thought, illuminating the double usage of will.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018

Thanks so much for this great review and comments,

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I admired your philosophical response to this prompt. Your rhymed couplets in these rhythmic quatrains are very effective and your questions are thought provoking. Best wishes in the competition- Joan

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018

Thanks Joan, for this great review and comments,

Comment from Tacticz

Excellent

I enjoyed the short yet strong words you delivered; the lead up to the question of divine rescue. The only negative feedback I have is in the plain font. I feel this poem would stand out more with a stronger font style. Great work regardless!

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2018

Thanks, for this great review and comments,

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

You have a smooth flow of words and lines that adds to your poetic form. There is almost a musical sound here in your poetic form. You last line is fitting and hopeful, perhaps with healing in His wings. This is a wonderful poem.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thanks, for this great review and comments,

Comment from RGstar

Excellent

A statement, yes, yet, elaborate and not without faith or wish, in which we are as one in thought. I guess we will continue with hope, but I am not sure, in any lifetime, if we will ever have that wish. Man too selfish.
Good luck in the competition.
RGstar

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thanks RG, for this great review and comments,

Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

I like the thought provoking nature of your work. There truly is to much hate in the world. This poem gives the reader many things to ponder and seek to change where change is needed. Very well done.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thanks Jeff, for this great review and comments,

Comment from Rubylou

Exceptional

There is so much food for thought within these two stanzas.

I often wonder how the world will end as you ponder if a rescue will indeed intercede.
Hope in His wings (to come and save us from ourselves- ) A true thought that should encourage us to rethink our own existence.

Wonderfully written,
Rubylou

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thanks Rubylou for this wonderful review and lovely comments, and amazing stars,

Comment from Bichon

Excellent

Beautiful poem. I think we can all agree on this topic, it would be great if we could all live in perfect harmony and love. Good luck in the contest.

Chloe

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thanks Chloe, for this great review and comments,