Comment from jppoet

Excellent

Wow. this is quite a LOVE BITE story, both humorous and biteful but artistcally dances in fine metrical cadences and sings in many sweet rhymes. Congratulations, john

 Comment Written 31-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 31-Jan-2018

Thank you so much John. Glad you enjoyed my poem. You have obviously looked at my portfolo. Thanks a bunch. LoveJen.

Comment from Brigitte Elko

Exceptional

This made me laugh out loud. The tale, well written, was a delightful diversion from the serious post that I have been reading lately. I see no flaws and believe to be a winning entry for the contest. The picture chosen could not have been any better. Good luck.
Have a great evening.
:)Brigitte

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

I'm so glad you liked it and thank you so much for the stars and comments. Jen.

Comment from For better for verse

Excellent

Great little story of love most certainly gone very wrong.
Very enjoyable and really quite humourous with great artwork.
Worthy contest entry....good luck!

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thank you so much for your comments.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This is a Love Bites poetry contest entry rich and seems Wells Andre flood well-read well with no grammar issues as well adjectives adjectives contents were both excellent and firmly in place scripted measures lined up perfectly good luck with this doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Many thanks

Comment from angel123

Excellent

Your love bites poem really bites. You wrote about meeting a winner. Ha! Ha! Your poem is well written and you told an interesting story. I like your ending and I also like your artwork choice. Best wishes!

Angel123

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

Thank you for your comments.

Comment from red6560

Excellent

Fun poem and humorous. It can be exactly how a relationship goes. Great spin on it as she takes relationship for granted. Love the rhyme. Best wishes in contest.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018

So glad you got the humour. Some took it seriously can you believe? Thanks so much for reading and commenting.

Comment from MSJVClarke

Excellent

This is an excellent poem for this contest. I think it will do well. It sure rings of many a hasty love affair gone wrong when searching for mates out there in this modern world. I truly enjoyed the poem and the artwork you chose serves it well.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018

Thanks for your comments

Comment from N.K. Wagner

Excellent

Doesn't sound much like love to me. Your poem takes a poke at fools who begin a relationship without knowing the other party. A recipe for disaster. Chuckle-worthy. :) Nancy

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018

Many thanks

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A raw and real write and sometimes when you offer a home to someone who has no job they will take advantage! Glad you are showing her the door! Good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018

Thanks for your review Dolly.

Comment from mkflood

Excellent

Lol.. this story reminds me of a poster. It had this beautiful blond in a bikini and written below was this. " Yes she is hot and inviting but remember she was probably someone else's problems". Wink. I do thank you for selecting my work. It does work well with yours. Great job on the story and thanks again.. MKFlood

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2018

I'm so glad you like it. Thanks so much for the use of your artwork. I love it.