Finale
contest entry10 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This zombie 5-7-5, Finale, has the right format and projects the given theme. I see you've fed the President to the flesh eaters. Whimper. So sad.
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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This zombie 5-7-5, Finale, has the right format and projects the given theme. I see you've fed the President to the flesh eaters. Whimper. So sad.
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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I appreciate your time and thank you for your insights.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahahaha, now this is the best one I've read so far in this contest, Anonymous Poet.
Not "just" because it pokes fun at Donna Trump, but because of all the double intendre, or plays on words, you've managed to include.
A top contender for my vote thus far...
Good luck!
~Dean :)
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Hahahaha, now this is the best one I've read so far in this contest, Anonymous Poet.
Not "just" because it pokes fun at Donna Trump, but because of all the double intendre, or plays on words, you've managed to include.
A top contender for my vote thus far...
Good luck!
~Dean :)
Comment Written 26-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jan-2018
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Wow! I am honored by your visit and just that is enough for me; I thank you for the time and wonderful review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Brigitte Elko
I laughed so hard, I cried when I read this. You are not a fan of the prez obviously.
Loved it!!!! Keep writing. This is an excellent entry for the Zombie 5-7-5 contest, good luck.
Maybe " marks in front of pleased? and after Trump?
Blessings,
:)Brigitte
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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I laughed so hard, I cried when I read this. You are not a fan of the prez obviously.
Loved it!!!! Keep writing. This is an excellent entry for the Zombie 5-7-5 contest, good luck.
Maybe " marks in front of pleased? and after Trump?
Blessings,
:)Brigitte
Comment Written 24-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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Hello Brigitte, thank you very much for your wonderful review; so glad you enjoyed it. And thank you for the suggestion; I'll do that.
Comment from tfawcus
It would seem that even an entry to the Zombie 5-7-5 can be turned to transmit a political message! An entertaining use of double meaning in your last line and in the novel twist to the "pleased to meet you" greeting.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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It would seem that even an entry to the Zombie 5-7-5 can be turned to transmit a political message! An entertaining use of double meaning in your last line and in the novel twist to the "pleased to meet you" greeting.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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tfawcus my friend, so glad you like the write; appreciate your time, thank you very much.
Comment from royowen
This will be the closest thing to a popular 5/7/5. I guess because Donald Trump, is closest to the popular whipping boy. Well done, a very perceptive and intuitive entry in this contest, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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This will be the closest thing to a popular 5/7/5. I guess because Donald Trump, is closest to the popular whipping boy. Well done, a very perceptive and intuitive entry in this contest, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 24-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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Roy my friend, thank you kindly, so glad you visited.
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Most welcome
Comment from Sherman541
Well, that is one way of getting rid of a president that few seem to want, yet many voted for. On the other hand maybe you are just roasting Donald, as he is a good topic currently to ridicule. Either way I think you did a nice job on the Zombie, 5/7/5 . Good Luck and Best Wishes in the contest ! Sherman
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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Well, that is one way of getting rid of a president that few seem to want, yet many voted for. On the other hand maybe you are just roasting Donald, as he is a good topic currently to ridicule. Either way I think you did a nice job on the Zombie, 5/7/5 . Good Luck and Best Wishes in the contest ! Sherman
Comment Written 24-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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Hello Sherman, I appreciate your time and the wonderful review; thank you very much.
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you are welcome ;)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Do, tell or act whatever, Trump is now a Zombie, the walking dead is scary to the nation; well said, well done, good luck to you with the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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Do, tell or act whatever, Trump is now a Zombie, the walking dead is scary to the nation; well said, well done, good luck to you with the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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Hello friend, thank you very much for your time and the encouraging review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Zombie 5-7-5 Contest.
I has a good, but grim, message in your poem.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the Zombie 5-7-5 Contest.
I has a good, but grim, message in your poem.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 24-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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Sharon my friend, I thank you for your time and the encouraging review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is a crazy Zombie write with a perfect picture and matching words! I wish you luck with the contest, I think this will make a lot of people laugh, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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This is a crazy Zombie write with a perfect picture and matching words! I wish you luck with the contest, I think this will make a lot of people laugh, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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Hello Dolly, thank you very much for the visit and the encouraging review.
Comment from Dan Diego
Timely, savvy, and funny. Those are the three ingredients for a clever little 5-7-5. The artwork fit the schema and the poem itself is telling. I have no doubt which side of the fence you fall on. (reviewed in the blind) Good luck in the booth.
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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Timely, savvy, and funny. Those are the three ingredients for a clever little 5-7-5. The artwork fit the schema and the poem itself is telling. I have no doubt which side of the fence you fall on. (reviewed in the blind) Good luck in the booth.
Comment Written 24-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
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Hey Dan, thank you very much for the visit and the wonderful review.
