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Freedom

An Acrostic

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This acrostic poem, FREEDOM, follows the vertical theme and points out the stupidity of leaving a human pig like Trump in office. I think we might recover if he's gone and the do-nothing Congress gets some backbone.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 24-Jan-2018
    Thank you sir, I agree.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Oh the artwork is amazing! And your acrostic is cleverly written and has heart and soul, I wish you luck with the contest, my favourite line: Freedom at risk, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
    Dolly my friend, I thank you for your visit and the encouraging review.
Comment from Kathy Allmon
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Wow, you wrote what I've been thinking. What direction are you going? Are you going to make this a bigger poem or a short story? I think thats one mark of a good writer to make a reader stop and think "huh" Where is this going?

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
    Hello Kathy, I appreciate your time and so glad that you like the write; thank you very much.
reply by Kathy Allmon on 20-Jan-2018
    Working on my writing. Hope to be posting my stuff soon.
Comment from moonsunrise
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I like your very candid acrostic poem. Our freedom is at risk. I have never seen our leadership to be this extreme, arrogant and self absorbed. Enough with the tweeting. Do your job Mr. President. Let freedom ring in our roots of democracy.
Thanks for sharing. Best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
    Hello moonsunrise, I like your pen-name; I thank you for your visit and the encouraging review; thank you very much.
Comment from Gloria ....
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Great job with a political/philosophical take. Democracy is fragile when there's no civil discourse, or even any discussion at all. The stunning cruelty of the administration is what I find the most heartbreaking. I'll never forget Stephen Miller demanding a brown man get down on the floor and pick up a piece of paper he'd deliberately dropped. He figured "they" should be servants and still does.

Best of luck to you in the contest.

Gloria

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
    Hello gloria; my friend I appreciate your visit and the insights; thank you very much.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Acrostic Poetry' writing prompt.
Well written, well done. The picture is a hoot.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018
    Hi Sharon, appreciate your visit and the kind review; glad you visited; thank you very much.