Comment from schatzling

Excellent

Lovely. Simply lovely. I can see why you chose my art to accompany it. It's fits ever so perfectly. I'm honored that you did select it and I thank you. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2018

Hi schatzling, I loved you artwork and thought it the one when I was searching it seemed to compliment my words so nicely so thank you for having it on FS site to choose it Cheers Christine

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Naani. Great four lines within the 25 syllable limit. Modern technogy made it possible for us to communicate with others on the other side of the ocean.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018

Hi Sandra, Thank you and yes we can communicate across the miles through our technology. This made second place so I am pleased .Cheers for you review have a great day Cheers Christine

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

I counted 24 syllables, well within the limits imposed by the Naani poetic form of 20-25.
The flow and rhyming are excellent for a poem of such short length.
I believe you just might have a top contender here for the win.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018

Hi Dean, Thank you and second place it came so not too shabby LOL . Thanks again for your review and faith in my poetry Cheers Christine

reply by Dean Kuch on 20-Jan-2018

Heck no, Christine. It's not shabby at all.
You're more than welcome and congratulations.

reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018

Hi Dean Thanks actually I am really pleased this did so well We have saying in Australia that by saying 'No too Shabby' actually means it's pretty good LOL . or if one drinks to much we would also say He/ she got a bit shabby Cheers And Many Thanks for your support and lovey congratulations Cheers Christine

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

nice. This feels like a tribute to Fanstory, indirectly. Lovely presentation. Nice bonus rhymes and fine medley of S sounds and W as well. Good imagery, tone and pacing. A contender. Good luck!

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018

Hi rd, That is exactly what this naani is about. I feel we all connect as kindred spirits from around the globe across many seas .Thanks for your perceptive review and nice review Cheers

reply by rama devi on 20-Jan-2018

Exactly! Really a true naani!

:-)))

reply by rama devi on 20-Jan-2018

;-)))

Comment from flylikeaneagle

Excellent

Great photo with your message. I think the world
moves fast upon the salty breeze is clever word usage.
I hope the kindred spirits can pray for peace. Good entry.
flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018

Hi flylikeaneagle, Thanks for your review and I think we are all moving across the seas in a unified connection with our poerty and prose Kindred spirits one and all Cheers

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 'Naani Poem' writing prompt.
Well done. This is nicely written with a good message in your few words.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018

Hi Sharon, Thanls for picking this up and I hope it gives is all a good vibe as we are kindred spirits in connection across many seas Cheers

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I've done a bit of sailing recently so you could be referring to me here, he he he, I loved your warm and guiding words, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018

Hi Dolly, Thanks and sailing sound lovely as long as it is a calm sea with a bottle of wine LOL. Cheers for your good luck in this contest

Comment from zanya

Excellent

Yes indeed - how nice to think of those 'kindred spirits' sharing our thoughts and reflections as 'Our words sail through the seas '- a superb pic to accompany

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Jan-2018

Hi zanya, Thanks just a thought as we all cross many seas with our words and unite out kindred writers spirits Cheers for your review

Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

I like this short, sweet, and to the point poem. Our words are able to go places all around the world. I like the globe you used to accompany your work. Well written and well done.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018

Hi Jeff ,Thanks for taking a look at my poem and sending good wishes to you fromm across the seas Cheers

Comment from MSJVClarke

Excellent

This is an excellent poem. I like that you used the ocean to emphasize the strengh of our words and relate it to salty breeze. I can envision this in many ways and feel the salty breeze myself.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018

Hi MsJVClarke, Thank you very much for reading my words from across the ocean I appreciate your time Cheers