Enchantment
With love, Little one.10 total reviews
Comment from GLOBALEYES
Very nicely done. Enchantment is a great word for a newborn because all are taken in who witness this miracle of life and experience these emotions. Good luck in the contest. Betty Davis
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
Very nicely done. Enchantment is a great word for a newborn because all are taken in who witness this miracle of life and experience these emotions. Good luck in the contest. Betty Davis
Comment Written 11-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2018
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Thank you for your great review and comments. I appreciate your time in reviewing it.
Comment from Writingfundimension
What a lovely, heart-warming poem. Your imagery conveys a sense of peace and harmony to this reader. I'm glad I stopped by to read and review. Well done!
Bev
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
What a lovely, heart-warming poem. Your imagery conveys a sense of peace and harmony to this reader. I'm glad I stopped by to read and review. Well done!
Bev
Comment Written 17-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much for the good review. I appreciate it!
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You're welcome.
Comment from Thor R
The picture with the poem was well chosen. You invoked all the senses with your words which is a feat in such a small poem. Would love to read more poems like this.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
The picture with the poem was well chosen. You invoked all the senses with your words which is a feat in such a small poem. Would love to read more poems like this.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much!
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
This is the best I've read so far - you've the right
idea - how you've listed just what enchantment is -
works well - a good entry for the contest. Good luck.
and I just love the picture - so adorable.
Margaret
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
This is the best I've read so far - you've the right
idea - how you've listed just what enchantment is -
works well - a good entry for the contest. Good luck.
and I just love the picture - so adorable.
Margaret
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much for the good review. Babies are enchanting!!
Comment from RodG
Any parent and grandparent understands the "enchantment" of a newborn baby. This Speaker describes SPECIFICALLY what causes it for her--all the sensory pleasures.
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
Any parent and grandparent understands the "enchantment" of a newborn baby. This Speaker describes SPECIFICALLY what causes it for her--all the sensory pleasures.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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Thank you for the good review. I appreciate it!!
Comment from James H. Oldfield
Excellent, surely a strong contender for the contest.
Lovely words and, crucially for the for, emotions. Helped, of course, by a great photo.
Good luck.
Take care.
-James
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
Excellent, surely a strong contender for the contest.
Lovely words and, crucially for the for, emotions. Helped, of course, by a great photo.
Good luck.
Take care.
-James
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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Thank you so much!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is so beautiful and I agree with every word, babies give so much without even realising it, new life has such wonderful prospects and your poem is full of enchantment, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
This is so beautiful and I agree with every word, babies give so much without even realising it, new life has such wonderful prospects and your poem is full of enchantment, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
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Thank you Dolly!! I appreciate the good review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
A nice poem on enchantment, mother gets and hopes for varied and more in the tomorrows with the growing baby, well said, well done; thanks for sharing this, good luck with the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
A nice poem on enchantment, mother gets and hopes for varied and more in the tomorrows with the growing baby, well said, well done; thanks for sharing this, good luck with the contest. Keep writing. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much for the good review.
Comment from MaryAnnie
I like how the author incorporates all five senses into the poem: smell, taste, sound, touch/feel, and sight/looking forward.
To improve this, I might suggest trading the phrase "bundle of joy" with a phrase less common and more personal - more whimsical or enchanting.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
I like how the author incorporates all five senses into the poem: smell, taste, sound, touch/feel, and sight/looking forward.
To improve this, I might suggest trading the phrase "bundle of joy" with a phrase less common and more personal - more whimsical or enchanting.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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Thanks so much for the good review.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Epigram Poetry writing prompt.
Well said, well written, and the picture is adorable.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
I think this is a good entry for the Epigram Poetry writing prompt.
Well said, well written, and the picture is adorable.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 15-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
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Thank you Sharon.