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Start with Oneself

An Emotion Poem

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Comment from Pearl Edwards
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Your emotion poem is full to the brim of beautiful sounds, scents and sensations Yvonne. Beautifully written, and a lovely final verse that sums up where happiness needs to start, within each of us. Very nice, I'd give it a six if I had one.
cheers.

 Comment Written 18-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 18-Jan-2018
    Thank you. Your comments are worth more than a six. 8-)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Yvonne,
This is a great emotion poem. You selected an awesome subject & expressed it well according to the rules. Your use of alliteration is awesome, too. Your words are strong & true & such a great message. Thanks for sharing an uplifting poem. Jan

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
    Thank you for an uplifting review. I all appreciate your opinion.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Yvonne, I came in late to read this wonderful poem, yet I still want to comment. It just exudes such happiness and joy of new-found love. A joy to read, and it deserves all the credits it's got. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
    Thank you so much. I don't care if you're late. I always love hearing from you.

    I hope you are doing well these days.
reply by Ulla on 16-Jan-2018
    I'm absolutely fine, but my ex husband to be does give me some grief, hence the acrostic I posted last night. I loved your poem. Ulla xx
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
    I thought that was what the acrostic was about. Stay brave. It will all be over eventually. 8-)
reply by Ulla on 16-Jan-2018
    I know, it will soon be over. Can't wait, and start my new life. Ulla:xx
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
    Ever need a sympathetic ear, PM me, and I'll give you my email.
reply by Ulla on 16-Jan-2018
    Oh, I'll love that. x
Comment from Dawn Munro
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I loved it, Yvonne, especially the warm feeling it evokes, and this: "It looks like shared smiles and beaming faces." Funny, but sometimes the simplest things mean the most, and the most expressive language, even in a poem, is the simple word...

Lovely 'first' try (show-off. LOL)

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
    Thank you. I'm telling Prissy you called her Auntie names. LOL
reply by Dawn Munro on 16-Jan-2018
    :(((((((( !!!!!!!!!!!
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Yvonne. Super job with this emotion poem. It resonates with me and the last line is the best, although entire poem is great. Happiness must start with oneself. So true. Marilyn

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018
    Thank you so much.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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A very nice Emotion Poem.
Well done and well said.
Your artwork is stunning as well.
Thank you for sharing this lovely piece with us.
Sharon

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
    Thank you for reviewing. Much appreciated.
Comment from Chrissy710
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Hi Damommy. You use lovely description is this emotion poem and brings a happy feeling within so well done for that and yes one must find inner happiness to be able to share with others. I am glad ypu shared this lovely post Cheers Christine

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018
    I appreciate you reviewing it. Thank you.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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I believe you have given the emotion poetry life and what a life! It is beautiful and it sways and swells with a mind of its own. Nice work with this one! xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
    Thank you for this wonderful review. 8-)
reply by kiwigirl2821 on 14-Jan-2018
    yvw. I haven't read much of your poetry and what I have read, well it's really good. xo Kiwi
Comment from Thomas Bowling
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This is excellent. It reminds me of Michael Jackson's song I'm Starting With the Man in the Mirror. It has the same message. The message we all need to hear.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
    Oh, my goodness. Thank you so much. I love that song. Hadn't given it a thought. I'm glad it reminded you, though. 8-)
Comment from Douglas Paul
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I like your descriptions of happiness. I think you got it right. I enjoyed this poem. Glad you gave emotions a try. Hope you are having great day, my friend

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2018

reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
    Thank you. I always appreciate your review. It was so good to talk with you today.