Comment from MaryAnnie

Good

This was a deeply emotional poem. I could sense the raw...questioning. And I struggled with where it was going. I could see myself asking some of the same questions, and I was not sure, entirely, how it resolved, but I did sense a glimpse of peace at the end. Writing is therapy. And I think this is a great place to continue. I hope you keep writing. It moved me.

MaryAnnie

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018

Thanks Mary Annie and I just reviewed one of your pieces doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from Gulbahar Sidhu

Excellent

Hi Dr Ricky,
Great poetry and wonderful and stark imagery conveying a powerful message for the mankind. I enjoyed the rhythm in your poem and how you lift the reader to the next level of spirituality.
Congratulations.

 Comment Written 17-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Jan-2018

Thanks ever so much for your time and wonderful review dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from DJFairchild

Average

I like the message, but it repeats some lines too much, which stops me. Like the first line you may consider I lie and wait.
Dear God,
is there more,
I can do besides
wait and lie
Or maybe just cry
Read your poem out loud and you will catch the changes.

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 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018

Sorry you seem to radiate more over the way it was presented in the in the meaning behind it I suggest you not only read it out loud Buttrey read it and catch the editors notes and then you'll realize the importance of this beautiful message.
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Comment from Zue65

Excellent

You do have a gift for writing poetry with a unique style truly your own. Too often, your poem border on eccentric, but the simplicity of the lines make it easier to understand despite it's eccentricity. Thanks for sharing, God bless.

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018

Why Miss Nassus...
Men's are ranked me Beyond human comprehension of Genius in the written world I make up and create my own words two who's who's of recognized me have a over 650 written books that sit in my house and I can give a s*** whether anybody reads them or not I wrote them for myself I write on this site to share to grieve and to believe from the Mind heart and soul talk to Ricky 1024 thanks for your review

reply by Zue65 on 16-Jan-2018

Dear Ricky1024, your poem is excellent, that's my message in my review for your poem "The Width of the Night Is Within". When I commented it may be eccentric it does not mean a negative comment, it is a positive review which means you are different from the rest for your poetic style is not the same as others. Five stars means an excellent write.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Hello, Dr. Ricky.
Hey, I really enjoyed reading this poem. It offers interesting insight and perspective in the process of death and dying. I too believe we will rise up one day and ascend to Paradise to live eternally forever with God.
Excellent work with this one.
God bless,
~Dean

 Comment Written 16-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2018

His death truly the final frontier or is there a process called Resurrection where were gifted again the spirit children in the spirit world cast through the the veil of forgetfulness and come back in another opportunity here to perhaps finish what we previously never got a chance to do thanks for your time. Dean dr. Ricky 1024

reply by Dean Kuch on 16-Jan-2018

My pleasure, Dr. Ricky. You're very welcome.
~Dean

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

I enjoyed reading this poem. It offers and interesting insight in the process of death. I too believe that will rise up to heaven with God's grace. You did good job on this

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018

Thanks Douglas glad you enjoyed this talk to Ricky 1024

Comment from Brigitte Elko

Excellent

Oh dear, this sad lament makes me cry, as do when reading most of your postings. I intend to travel through your journey of loss as you keep writing. It is well written as it continues battling the demon within.
May I invite you to read Dear Elizabeth,my posting?
This is a way I dealt with loss, I wrote, as you are doing.
Blessings my friend,
Brigitte

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018

Thanks Bridget for reviewing this and my other pieces it's so important to me I actually read your piece previously but forgot to rate it so thanks and it was wonderful dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

A beautiful poem Ricky, you have done very well and I enjoyed this very much. Well done I hope you are keeping well and thanks for the kind and generous reviews also love Meia xx

 Comment Written 15-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2018

Ass keeping well miss Mia so cold here in Jersey right now though we've already had for snow falls and that's much more than we had last year but I also enjoyed your writings you have a good hold on terror and horror which is unusual beautiful woman usually likes comedy and drama the find that to be pretty rare I enjoy horror movies to my grandson he's only 8 I started him watching those Chucky doll movies and he gets a kick out of my he knows none of its real though which is important when they're younger to let them know that so have a wonderful day I'll review you again later talk to Ricky 1024

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

I disregard the quotes, I know it's your chosen style. This is a classic free verse, kinda stream of conscience and full of image and pain. Excellent post.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018

Hi little red if you enjoy this you'll enjoy my A&B poems dedicated to my past wife about the red rose and stuck to Ricky 1024

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Interesting concept. The photo is superb for your wording. I find nothing wrong with this tribute toward the Almighty. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018

Thanks Ben and glad you enjoyed this.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today