The life of a bard
Contest entry6 total reviews
Comment from samantha0930
I really like your poem; it's really fun :) And you made a 5-7-5 poem even in the midst of complaining about how tedious(?) it is--to write something so short and get the syllables correct.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
I really like your poem; it's really fun :) And you made a 5-7-5 poem even in the midst of complaining about how tedious(?) it is--to write something so short and get the syllables correct.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Hello Samantha, I am pleased you visited and like the poem; appreciate your time and the wonderful review; thank you very much.
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You're welcome :)
Comment from mvbrooks
Cute, witty, pithy. Nice drawing that adds to the playfulness of the poem and therefore is a strong pairing. Good luck in your contest and enjoyed the humor.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
Cute, witty, pithy. Nice drawing that adds to the playfulness of the poem and therefore is a strong pairing. Good luck in your contest and enjoyed the humor.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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I am glad that you like the humor in the verse my friend, I thank you for your visit and the wonderful review.
Comment from zanya
This Life of a........raises a hearty chuckle -what an interesting way to spend time..not counting sheep but counting syllables ...it goes on and on and on....well done ..
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
This Life of a........raises a hearty chuckle -what an interesting way to spend time..not counting sheep but counting syllables ...it goes on and on and on....well done ..
Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Hello zanya, I am pleased you visited and like the write, thank you very much.
Comment from artisart4u
This is funny and correct.
I see on the web a bard was a very important trusted person.
You have the correct amount of syllables.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
This is funny and correct.
I see on the web a bard was a very important trusted person.
You have the correct amount of syllables.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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I thank you for stopping by and the wonderful comments.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the 'The Life of a .....' writing prompt.
Short and sweet, to the point.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
sahron
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
I think this is a good entry for the 'The Life of a .....' writing prompt.
Short and sweet, to the point.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
sahron
Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Hello Sharon, I am pleased that you like the write, thank you very much for the encouraging review.
Comment from Joy Graham
This is a cute contest entry :) Love the picture and message combination. Your syllables all counted out fine for me. You managed to get a great message across in a tiny poetry form. Best wishes in the contest.
Joy xx
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
This is a cute contest entry :) Love the picture and message combination. Your syllables all counted out fine for me. You managed to get a great message across in a tiny poetry form. Best wishes in the contest.
Joy xx
Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Hello Joy, I am glad that you like the poem, thank you very much for the visit.