My Pledge Of Love
Dedicated to my wife (Not Lauryn Hill).20 total reviews
Comment from Rasmine
Hello, :)
This was the sweetest poem to your wife. Make sure you give it to her with a bouquet of flowers and a box of chocolates :P
I'm not sure about taking the titles of song, maybe if you put them in quotes or change it so it is your own. I am not sure about all the copyright stuff.
Hey, TC and good poem. Keep on writing. I loved your rhyming.
:)
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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Hello, :)
This was the sweetest poem to your wife. Make sure you give it to her with a bouquet of flowers and a box of chocolates :P
I'm not sure about taking the titles of song, maybe if you put them in quotes or change it so it is your own. I am not sure about all the copyright stuff.
Hey, TC and good poem. Keep on writing. I loved your rhyming.
:)
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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I am sure that there is no problem with using song titles, only if you try to represent the words or tune as yours. Thank you for your great comments.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
I am a HUGE fan of Lauryn Hill. Beautiful and with a stunning voice. I loved her in the Fugees and as a solo artist. Have you heard her hidden track " You're just too good to be true? Absolutely amazing. Much better than the original for sure. Loved the poem and the artwork with this. Well done my friend a brilliant write about a gorgeous and ultra talented lady. Love Meia :)
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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I am a HUGE fan of Lauryn Hill. Beautiful and with a stunning voice. I loved her in the Fugees and as a solo artist. Have you heard her hidden track " You're just too good to be true? Absolutely amazing. Much better than the original for sure. Loved the poem and the artwork with this. Well done my friend a brilliant write about a gorgeous and ultra talented lady. Love Meia :)
Comment Written 14-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2018
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I can't thank you enough, your continuing support warms my heart and gives me the strength and desire to go on and get better.
Comment from Dean Kuch
A-w-w-wwwwwwww.... How sweet, Nomi.
Yeah, I remember having someone in my life who I loved this much...once.
I can tell you this.
I will never allow it to happen again.
Nicely written ode to your beloved wife.
~Dean
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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A-w-w-wwwwwwww.... How sweet, Nomi.
Yeah, I remember having someone in my life who I loved this much...once.
I can tell you this.
I will never allow it to happen again.
Nicely written ode to your beloved wife.
~Dean
Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Darn Dean, did she hurt you that much? Breathe, man, breathe, and then let it go. LOL.
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Yes, she did, Nomi, and I have let "it go."
It'll just never happen again.
Just sex with no strings attached is fine with me. Who needs love to muddle up the mix?
~Dean
Comment from Liberty Justice
Very beautiful photo and great tribute to this lovely singer. Her R&B classic songs are so emotional and touching. Did you enter the contest? Well, this is a great competition entry. Good luck. I love the way she wears all of that jewelry. WELL WRITTEN. liberty justice
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Very beautiful photo and great tribute to this lovely singer. Her R&B classic songs are so emotional and touching. Did you enter the contest? Well, this is a great competition entry. Good luck. I love the way she wears all of that jewelry. WELL WRITTEN. liberty justice
Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Thank you, I appreciate your comments.
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Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like your style! This was cute, sweet, and romantic. I like the flow of it and accompanying artwork. This was very well written and very well done. Thanks for sharing this. I enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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I like your style! This was cute, sweet, and romantic. I like the flow of it and accompanying artwork. This was very well written and very well done. Thanks for sharing this. I enjoyed it.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Hey Jeff. Thank you for your great comments, they made my day.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
Well done. A classy piece for your beloved. Very nice.
I like the way you have incorporated the song titles into your work.
Very nice. Thank you for sharing this writing with us.
Sharon
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Well done. A classy piece for your beloved. Very nice.
I like the way you have incorporated the song titles into your work.
Very nice. Thank you for sharing this writing with us.
Sharon
Comment Written 12-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Thank you, some have said that in a way it is either cheating or just a lazy man's way of writing. I don't care what they say I like it.
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, My Pledge of Love, is slyly erected with lots of hidden song titles and mortared with connective emotions that cement the sentiment into the brick house of a solid relationship.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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This poem, My Pledge of Love, is slyly erected with lots of hidden song titles and mortared with connective emotions that cement the sentiment into the brick house of a solid relationship.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Be careful there Bill, you just revealed a level of perception I never knew you possessed. The government will be knocking at your door soon trying to recruit you.
Comment from Pantygynt
I have to say that without your notes I would not have caught onto the musical innuendoes, apart from "Sweetest Thing", but that is down to my ignorance not yours. Written mainly in rhyming couplets of iambic tetrameter the occasional trochaic feet substituted fit into the overal rhythm of the poem and do not jar.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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I have to say that without your notes I would not have caught onto the musical innuendoes, apart from "Sweetest Thing", but that is down to my ignorance not yours. Written mainly in rhyming couplets of iambic tetrameter the occasional trochaic feet substituted fit into the overal rhythm of the poem and do not jar.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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You sir, you and your sneaky way of teaching are one of the main benefits of membership on this site. I pity those who ignore or otherwise fail to learn from skilled writers like you, Dean Kuch and a few others. Thank you.
Comment from jenintorre
I really enjoyed reading your poem. I found it so uplifting and very romantic. Your wife is very lucky. I also like those songs. Best wishes Jen.
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. I found it so uplifting and very romantic. Your wife is very lucky. I also like those songs. Best wishes Jen.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Thank you Jen. I love the positive encouragement it makes a great deal of difference.
Comment from Janet Foor
A wonderful Pledge Of Love Nomi. I'm sure your wife was thrilled to read it. I love the songs you used for this piece. Very nicely done my friend.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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A wonderful Pledge Of Love Nomi. I'm sure your wife was thrilled to read it. I love the songs you used for this piece. Very nicely done my friend.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 11-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2018
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Thank you Janet. Reviews like your make writing and submitting work here a definite pleasure.
