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I Write

The Why of Why I Write

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Comment from dragonpoet
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Writing is often catharsis for us. It allows us to understand ourselves and sometimes the world around us. Freeing our memories can make us stronger. This is a nicely done free verse poem with well chose line and stanza breaks.

Congrats on placing in the contest

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018
    thank you so much. It was cathartic to write and helped me to understand myself. I appreciate your words.
reply by dragonpoet on 17-Jun-2018
    You are most kindly welcome. Writing is always cathartic for me too.

    dp
Comment from kiwijenny
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Beautiful and so true...I find writing clarifies my thoughts that before they are written down are a messy jumble
You coined it...the pen has life
Well penned
God bless

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
    Thank you so much. Writing this lifted my spirits.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the Free Verse writing prompt.
Writing your verse about why your write is clever.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
    Thank you so much. Writing this lifted my spirits.
Comment from kahpot
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This is an excellent free verse poem and the lines beginning with I write are so true of all who write to understand and have someone who will listen (read) very well done and good luck in your competition****kahpot

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
    thank you so much. This felt good to express and made me feel understood.
Comment from Debbie Pope
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Judy, what a open, honest poem. It is so well expressed. I live separated from my thoughts. I know exactly what you are writing about. I'm not yet as brave as you. I write around my thoughts rather than let them out to heal. Maybe some day I'll give my pen a better life. Hats off to you. You write beautifully.

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
    Debbie I so appreciate your beautiful review. Your pen will have life soon, because writing makes us become honest. You made my day.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
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Hello Judy, what a great free verse poem for the contest, and best of luck with this well-written entry. I like that you aren't bound to form and experiment in placing the words on the page/screen, it gave your poem a very unique style which I enjoyed very much. I have no suggestions for making your poem better, and I liked finding out about you and what makes you write. I sometimes call it 'writing and other forms of insanity', LOL

Feels like that sometimes, and have a great day/night, Ana :)

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
    I love that writing and other forms of insanity, it is truly freeing for the soul. Thank you for your kind words.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
    I love that writing and other forms of insanity, it is truly freeing for the soul. Thank you for your kind words.
Comment from Joan E.
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I admired your courage to write this very personal, free verse poem. I am pleased you have discovered that the "pen has life". Here's to reaching "for a ray of sunshine" by writing. Cheers and I hope this poem was well received in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2018


reply by the author on 26-Mar-2018
    Thank you so much Joan. Writing is so freeing when we edit it for grammar but not content. Then we find out who we really are. Thank you so much for caring.

reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
    I love your comment about free writing when we edit for grammar not content.. Words to always live by thank you.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018