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Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "my life raft"keep your hope alive....
12 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
With all due respect, Anonymous Poet, I wholeheartedly disagree with your assessment of mankind in general.
Man is a greedy, money-grubbing, selfish, self indulgent creature.
We destroy acres of forest through deforestation, pollute our planet's air, waterways and ground.
No, man is inherently evil in my humble opinion.
But, you know what they say about opinions, right?
Good luck to you.
~Dean
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018
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With all due respect, Anonymous Poet, I wholeheartedly disagree with your assessment of mankind in general.
Man is a greedy, money-grubbing, selfish, self indulgent creature.
We destroy acres of forest through deforestation, pollute our planet's air, waterways and ground.
No, man is inherently evil in my humble opinion.
But, you know what they say about opinions, right?
Good luck to you.
~Dean
Comment Written 08-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2018
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yea, there are evil people out there....
Comment from BeasPeas
I don't know if this is biographical or fiction. In either case it's realistic in the way you have portrayed it. What I do know is that there have always been good and bad people in the world and there will continue to be those. Not one doggone thing we can do about it except be nice and helpful to each person on a one-to-one level. There is no sense in worrying. Worrying gets us nowhere and is a total waste of energy. Your character in the story--or yourself, if true, needs to seek help, move on and have a great life. Good luck in the contest with this interesting post. Marilyn
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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I don't know if this is biographical or fiction. In either case it's realistic in the way you have portrayed it. What I do know is that there have always been good and bad people in the world and there will continue to be those. Not one doggone thing we can do about it except be nice and helpful to each person on a one-to-one level. There is no sense in worrying. Worrying gets us nowhere and is a total waste of energy. Your character in the story--or yourself, if true, needs to seek help, move on and have a great life. Good luck in the contest with this interesting post. Marilyn
Comment Written 07-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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thank you marilyn :)
Comment from jenintorre
This is very good entry for the I believe contest. I do agree with you that most people are good, kind honest people and that it is only a very small percentage that are not,.
I wish you good luck in the competition.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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This is very good entry for the I believe contest. I do agree with you that most people are good, kind honest people and that it is only a very small percentage that are not,.
I wish you good luck in the competition.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2018
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thank you jen :-)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. Without faith we have no hope. When we don't have hope it seems very hard to believe that our circumstances will ever change.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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A very well-written poem. Without faith we have no hope. When we don't have hope it seems very hard to believe that our circumstances will ever change.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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thank you sandra :)
Comment from Sugarray77
Such a powerful and moving journal about believing and caring about others even through disillusionment. I'm glad you shared your heart and point of view. Keep writing ... and keep feeling better. Well done.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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Such a powerful and moving journal about believing and caring about others even through disillusionment. I'm glad you shared your heart and point of view. Keep writing ... and keep feeling better. Well done.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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thank you ray :-)
Comment from Ricky1024
Assassin I believe right in front porch and seem as well as imagery that flowed well read well with very little grammar issue so to speak adjective object the contents most excellent if two measures lined up perfectly good luck in the contest.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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Assassin I believe right in front porch and seem as well as imagery that flowed well read well with very little grammar issue so to speak adjective object the contents most excellent if two measures lined up perfectly good luck in the contest.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment Written 05-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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thank you ricky :-)
Comment from smudge
I agree with you. It is so important to write your feelings down. The content is the heart of all writing. The authenticity of the record can lead to hope and change. No steps are taken for change until it is demanded by words.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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I agree with you. It is so important to write your feelings down. The content is the heart of all writing. The authenticity of the record can lead to hope and change. No steps are taken for change until it is demanded by words.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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so true! thank you smudge :)
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
This is a bit confuing to me. *smile* Sounds like it might be a bit confusing to you, too. I'm glad that your primary statement is that you believe that writing is your catharsis -- and that doesn't change. The belief in people does seem to change in the piece, and that might confuse some.
By the way, the contest calls for prose and you have added this in the category of poetry.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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Dear Mystery Writer,
This is a bit confuing to me. *smile* Sounds like it might be a bit confusing to you, too. I'm glad that your primary statement is that you believe that writing is your catharsis -- and that doesn't change. The belief in people does seem to change in the piece, and that might confuse some.
By the way, the contest calls for prose and you have added this in the category of poetry.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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thank you robyn :-)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Anne Frank had great faith in human nature as you have, and it's a pity that there are people in this world who want to extinguish such bright burning flames. You sailed in your life raft here and I enjoyed your words and I too continue to believe that people are good at heart. A warm and honest write. Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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Anne Frank had great faith in human nature as you have, and it's a pity that there are people in this world who want to extinguish such bright burning flames. You sailed in your life raft here and I enjoyed your words and I too continue to believe that people are good at heart. A warm and honest write. Love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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thank you dolly :)
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the I Believe contest.
Well written, and a good story, above all, we have to maintain our hope.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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I think this is a good entry for the I Believe contest.
Well written, and a good story, above all, we have to maintain our hope.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 05-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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thank you sharon :-)
