Innovation
Man's creative abilities68 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
A nicely worded 5-7-5 poem which gives a true statement. Thoughts that we entertained yesterday still remain with us today and can be used for new ideas to be useful even in the future.
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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A nicely worded 5-7-5 poem which gives a true statement. Thoughts that we entertained yesterday still remain with us today and can be used for new ideas to be useful even in the future.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2020
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2020
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Thanks for taking time to review my poem and giving me five stars.
Comment from Drew Delaney
My brain no longer can do much brain storming anymore, but I make feeble attempts. Not in short Haiku's though. You have done marvellous with this Haiku. Best wishes in the contest.
Drew
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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My brain no longer can do much brain storming anymore, but I make feeble attempts. Not in short Haiku's though. You have done marvellous with this Haiku. Best wishes in the contest.
Drew
Comment Written 08-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2020
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Thank for so much for taking the time from your busy schedule to review one of my poems.
Comment from TPAC
Well spoken, deserving a six not having any, finding its features detailing precise and captivating to its reader interests. I thought it was great able to grip ones attention. All in my opinion of this work.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Well spoken, deserving a six not having any, finding its features detailing precise and captivating to its reader interests. I thought it was great able to grip ones attention. All in my opinion of this work.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Thanks for taking your time to review, the five stars and the nice comment.
Comment from fm wright
A very good entry for the haiku contest. The count is good. It flows together in one complete thought. The picture goes well with it. Best of wishes with this piece!
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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A very good entry for the haiku contest. The count is good. It flows together in one complete thought. The picture goes well with it. Best of wishes with this piece!
Comment Written 05-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Thanks for the five stars, nice comment and taking the time to review.
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You are most welcome!
Comment from Narelle Bannister
This is like writing a poem about writing a poem. Brainstorming about brainstorming ...I cant find any criticism for this simple, straightforward Haiku. May your future thoughts continue to be fruitful ones.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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This is like writing a poem about writing a poem. Brainstorming about brainstorming ...I cant find any criticism for this simple, straightforward Haiku. May your future thoughts continue to be fruitful ones.
Comment Written 05-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2018
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Thanks for the five stars and taking the time to review
and the nice comment.
Comment from Mistydawn
You've described the process perfectly, ideas of today lead to future technology. This entire world is built on hopes, dreams, and prayers. The poem is well-written, your great word choice brings your message across loud and clear, great job.
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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You've described the process perfectly, ideas of today lead to future technology. This entire world is built on hopes, dreams, and prayers. The poem is well-written, your great word choice brings your message across loud and clear, great job.
Comment Written 23-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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Thanks for the five stars and review.
We do need hopes, prayers and dreams.
prayerss and dreams.
Comment from Kelly Grim
Nicely done! I think man will always be thinking up new ways and new approaches and new ideas! I have always loved the word brainstorming. The pic is perfect... for me it brings to mind industrial and technologically advance, a little bit of the past (like your first line) and shows just how far we've come!
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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Nicely done! I think man will always be thinking up new ways and new approaches and new ideas! I have always loved the word brainstorming. The pic is perfect... for me it brings to mind industrial and technologically advance, a little bit of the past (like your first line) and shows just how far we've come!
Comment Written 23-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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Thanks for your review and five stars.
Comment from Julie Pie
I really like the haiku you have written. It paints a picture of old thoughts coming back into new ideas, and the title is perfect. I really enjoyed reading.
Julie
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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I really like the haiku you have written. It paints a picture of old thoughts coming back into new ideas, and the title is perfect. I really enjoyed reading.
Julie
Comment Written 23-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 23-Oct-2018
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Thanks for your review and five stars.
Comment from Pantygynt
Although this does not have the connection with nature and the seasonal references so many believe to be essential it does have an essentially Japanese flavour. There are those here as well who say that capital letters are a no-no with these because the Japanese do not have capital letters, but we are writing in English.
I think you have made a great start with this.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Although this does not have the connection with nature and the seasonal references so many believe to be essential it does have an essentially Japanese flavour. There are those here as well who say that capital letters are a no-no with these because the Japanese do not have capital letters, but we are writing in English.
I think you have made a great start with this.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Thanks do much and this is true. But on the other side we can say raw. material is natural.
I wii change the letters. I guess if you are etiting a haiku it should be a haiku.
Thanks for the
review and five stars.
Comment from Lance Polin
Great picture for the thought. It is an interesting message considering the level of filth that is spraying out into the sky. You show the plus and minus of civilization, progress and destruction. The ideas that continue to grow will sometimes destroy us.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Great picture for the thought. It is an interesting message considering the level of filth that is spraying out into the sky. You show the plus and minus of civilization, progress and destruction. The ideas that continue to grow will sometimes destroy us.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2018
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Yes you are true, that is horrific what has taken place over centuries but man is learning every day safer ways to accommodate their innovational projects.
Thanks for the review and five stars. Your time especially.
