They Learned . . .
Discovered New Ways31 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
Hi Yvonne, it wouldn't hurt us to back a view steps...maybe we could get it right...and not be poisoning our selves with everything we eat, drink, and breathe...they were created by God...I don't think they were stupid...I think they just had to learn by mistakes...love your poem sweet girl...and love this picture...very well written...I love poems about history...love you...Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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Hi Yvonne, it wouldn't hurt us to back a view steps...maybe we could get it right...and not be poisoning our selves with everything we eat, drink, and breathe...they were created by God...I don't think they were stupid...I think they just had to learn by mistakes...love your poem sweet girl...and love this picture...very well written...I love poems about history...love you...Linda xxoo
Comment Written 06-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2018
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Thank you for this very insightful review. I agree with you. They definitely were not stupid, but they had to learn by trial and error, I suppose. I think it's amazing that they survived in ways we can only imagine.
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it truly is amazing...and you are so welcome...xxoo love
Comment from Pantygynt
Oh I am glad to see this make an appearance. I have run the reference to earth.
"A Dissertation upon Roast Pig by Charles Lamb" Is available as a free ebook and in other forms as well and you really shoul read it. It answers all the questions you poem asks.
Very well done with the anapaest too.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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Oh I am glad to see this make an appearance. I have run the reference to earth.
"A Dissertation upon Roast Pig by Charles Lamb" Is available as a free ebook and in other forms as well and you really shoul read it. It answers all the questions you poem asks.
Very well done with the anapaest too.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2018
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You know how much a six from you means.
I will look for that book. I'm fascinated with cave people.
Comment from oliver818
I really enjoyed this poem. I like the theme you chose, it works really well and the whole poem is easy to read. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
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I really enjoyed this poem. I like the theme you chose, it works really well and the whole poem is easy to read. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 03-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018
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Thank you for reviewing. I hope you have a good day, too.
Comment from Janet Foor
A good story in a poem. Discovering fire would be a surprise and amazing for the cave dweller. Nice rhyme, internal rhyme and good use of alliteration.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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A good story in a poem. Discovering fire would be a surprise and amazing for the cave dweller. Nice rhyme, internal rhyme and good use of alliteration.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Thank you for a great review. I'm happy you like it.
Comment from Bichon
Very good poem. The imagery in the poem itself is very well presented and makes for a good and delightful read. Great job with it and have a good new year.
Chloe
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Very good poem. The imagery in the poem itself is very well presented and makes for a good and delightful read. Great job with it and have a good new year.
Chloe
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Thank you. You, too.
Comment from DR DIP
I have not heard of an anapestic poem before. I will have to look up it's properties.
It's a very interesting poem you have penned Yvonne. Can you imagine discovering fire for the first time it would be amazing. Thanks for sharing.
dip
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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I have not heard of an anapestic poem before. I will have to look up it's properties.
It's a very interesting poem you have penned Yvonne. Can you imagine discovering fire for the first time it would be amazing. Thanks for sharing.
dip
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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That's what I thought. What a surprise! Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Boogienights
I can see how this would be fascinating to kids, it caught my attention as well . Very interesting and well written, I like poems that teach as well as entertain. Have you ever seen clan of the cave bear? It's a pretty good movie that relates to your topic. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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I can see how this would be fascinating to kids, it caught my attention as well . Very interesting and well written, I like poems that teach as well as entertain. Have you ever seen clan of the cave bear? It's a pretty good movie that relates to your topic. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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I've not seen the movie, but I've read the book several times. Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from smileycloud
a really interesting story in a poem
your dadaDUM's look all fine to my untrained eye but it sure does read really well without any trouble at all
I like your rhymes and it looks like only two verses have an ABAB scheme and the other verses only rhyme the B and the D line together
hope I have this right because I have really enjoyed your poem
as your word imagery is great
blessings
have a smiley day
Lorraine
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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a really interesting story in a poem
your dadaDUM's look all fine to my untrained eye but it sure does read really well without any trouble at all
I like your rhymes and it looks like only two verses have an ABAB scheme and the other verses only rhyme the B and the D line together
hope I have this right because I have really enjoyed your poem
as your word imagery is great
blessings
have a smiley day
Lorraine
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Thank you for a delightful review. I appreciate your lovely comments.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Food for thought here all in great rhymes, we have come a long way from those days and our communication with each other improved so much. But we still basically cook on open flames don't we? A clever and rhyming write, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Food for thought here all in great rhymes, we have come a long way from those days and our communication with each other improved so much. But we still basically cook on open flames don't we? A clever and rhyming write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Thank you. I appreciate your review. Yes, we pretty much cook the same way, even after all this time. 8-) (Except for microwaves.)
Comment from emptypage
(Love your new profile pic!)
This is great. And I say, no, we would not be living as we are if these wonderfully curious and creative people had not been curious and creative. I wonder what our curiosities will bring for the future?
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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(Love your new profile pic!)
This is great. And I say, no, we would not be living as we are if these wonderfully curious and creative people had not been curious and creative. I wonder what our curiosities will bring for the future?
Comment Written 02-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Thank you for saying that. It all had to start somewhere, didn't it? I would like to witness that kind of wonder. We only find it in small children now. As for the future, I'm afraid to speculate. We seem to be overreaching ourselves.
