Comment from Rubylou

Excellent

Hello Teri,
LOL, I can imagine the scene as the tiny kittens race and scurry on the kitchen floor.

"Water everywhere." This simple line made me smile- nice lighthearted fun!
Rubylou

 Comment Written 03-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2018

lol Thanks for the great review my friend! They are not so tiny anymore but they sure are cute! You made me smile all over again reading your review! love, Teri

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Teri, they can be a hand full...but just watching them play is so much fun...I love the way they move and play...thank you for sharing this lovely story my sweet friend...and I love the picture...very nicely written...God Bless...love you lots...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018

Thank you my sweet friend! I hope you are doing good! Hope we can talk again real soon! love you! teri

reply by l.raven on 02-Jan-2018

HI Teri, I am doing better...trying to keep my mind busy...right now to much thinking isn't good...it good memories I have...but they will never be repeated...it will be ok...thank you my sweet friend for caring...and you are so very welcome...love you so...Linda xxoo we will talk soon...

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Yes,Teri
your short poem about the cats spelling water all over the floor would make me smile especial when I love cats
I agree with you that laughter is a great medicine
Gert

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018

Thanks Gert for the great review and very nice comments! They do tend to make me laugh quite often. I think it has to do with their little personalities and cute little faces! Blessings, Teri

Comment from brenda faye curtis

Excellent

This is a cute story, effectively telling the story with a humorous conclusion within the limits of the format. The only way it could be cuter would be to pair it with a picture of playful kittens. :) Flash fiction is not easy, but you've done this well.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018

Thank you Brenda for the great review and very nice comments. I wish I had a picture of them, but they are so big now they don't look like kittens! But they really are! lol Blessings, Teri

reply by brenda faye curtis on 04-Jan-2018

You're welcome, Teri. Have a blessed day!

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Kittens and puppies will never cease to cause us smiles and laughter. Baby animals, their wide eyes and antics melt the heart. I enjoyed your true little story. I'm glad you brought them in from the cold. Marilyn

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018

Thank you so much Marilyn for the great review and very nice comments! Blessings and love, Teri

Comment from Asem.inspirations

Excellent

Good morning, Teri: Yes, cats can be so interesting and funny. I guess the beast thing you could do was to laugh about it. O love the picture with Greyson laughing so hard. It is so appropriate for this post. You truly have such a big, big heart and God is smiling for all that you do for these cats. I'm sure that Greyson enjoys every second spent with them too.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018

Thank you so much Tier for the great review and very nice comments. This is not a picture of Greyson, but very well could have been my friend. This is a picture provided for the contest! Blessings, Teri

Comment from smileycloud

Excellent

Yes it is
I wish I could just say that and agree with you but it does not reach 150 characters
lol
your day must have been truly made especially considering the animal content
sounds great
blessings my friend
have a laughing day every day
Lorraine

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018

Thank you so much my friend. They do something every day to make me giggle or laugh! I am thankful we have them! Blessings and love, Teri

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Well, yeah, Teri.
The kittens were calm at first because they were frozen half to death.
Once they thawed out, things got to rockin' and a' rollin'!
Just wait until they triple in size.
Oh, what fun that will be!
Good submission for the Flash Fiction Club's 'Don't laugh' challenge.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018

lol You are just too funny Dean! It was a fun mess to be honest! They are full size cats, but I call them the kittens still! Blessings! Teri

reply by Dean Kuch on 02-Jan-2018

Well, Teri.
In my defense, I see "kitten" I think baby cat.
Know what I mean?
You're welcome.
~Dean

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

How fun that you enjoyed the little kittens running around. Did your other cats get offended that you brought more in? Hope all is safe and peaceful and enjoyable there!

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018

Thank you so much Helen for the great review and very nice comments. The cats that are older do not like having company so much, but we couldn't let them freeze! Blessings and love, Teri

reply by lyenochka on 02-Jan-2018

Thank you for caring for those freezing little kittens!

Comment from MelB

Excellent

So glad you brought those little furry friends in from the cold. So many people don't do that and they freeze to death or get frost bite on their paws. It sounds like they caused a frenzy though.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018

lol You would have laughed too. It looked so cute trying to get away from the water bowl! They are just too cute and furry to leave outside in this cold. Please pray for Grey. We can't get it to come in the house. We don't know where it goes. I just pray for it and we feed it and pet it when it lets us. I say its a boy, Tom says its a girl! oh well! love you my friend and Happy New Year! I love you!