Brain Dead
Humerous 5-7-511 total reviews
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good entry for the Humorous 5-7-5 Poem writing prompt.
Funny picture as well.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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This is a good entry for the Humorous 5-7-5 Poem writing prompt.
Funny picture as well.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 01-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Hi Sharon I saw this contest last night and wrote this in 1 minute for a bit of cheeky fun to star off the New Year. Ha Ha Glad you took a look Brain still functioning LOL thanks for your review Cheers
Comment from BeasPeas
What a handsome specimen. I mean it truly. He should be in the jungle. But--your piece is humorous and the image appropriate. We enter a lot of contests here and hope to win one SOME day. We're off to a new start in 2018, maybe a better year. Great job and good luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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What a handsome specimen. I mean it truly. He should be in the jungle. But--your piece is humorous and the image appropriate. We enter a lot of contests here and hope to win one SOME day. We're off to a new start in 2018, maybe a better year. Great job and good luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 01-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
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Hi Marilyn, Yes he is gorgeous and I thought may just fit this 5-7-5 LOL Couldn?t resist the challenge of this contest Ha Ha
Cheers
Comment from zanya
Yes this humorous 5-7-5 raises a hearty chuckle -sometimes it seems that way'Too many contests entered'- or maybe we should try to remember that hope springs eternal especially in the writing milieu...well done !!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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Yes this humorous 5-7-5 raises a hearty chuckle -sometimes it seems that way'Too many contests entered'- or maybe we should try to remember that hope springs eternal especially in the writing milieu...well done !!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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Hi zanya Yes one can hope all they want But is is the Votes that count This was written as a bit of cheeky fun win lose or draw I don?t mind LOL Thanks for you review. Cheers
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer, (-wink-)
I found this is your portfolio when there was a glitch in my messages this afternoon. I came by to check it out and found this. Ha!!
I don't think anyone will relate, though....
Not.
Hahahahaha!! Good luck!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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Dear Mystery Writer, (-wink-)
I found this is your portfolio when there was a glitch in my messages this afternoon. I came by to check it out and found this. Ha!!
I don't think anyone will relate, though....
Not.
Hahahahaha!! Good luck!
Comment Written 01-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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Ha Ha Robyn Now don?t tell anyone I wrote this last night before I went to sleep and thought it might just make some people laugh Ha Ha Thanks for your review Mums the word LOL
Cheers MO
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 humorous poem. I know how you feel. It seems I always make the wrong choice of subject for any contest and seem to be over looked all the time.
Happy New Year to you and your family.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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A very well-written 5-7-5 humorous poem. I know how you feel. It seems I always make the wrong choice of subject for any contest and seem to be over looked all the time.
Happy New Year to you and your family.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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Hi Sandra Thank you for your review I thought I would start the year off with a funny one . Really tongue in cheek LOL Cheers
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I enter contests with the mindset that I won't win. I completely get where you are coming from. Sometimes it's hard to enter them when you know there are so many other talented writers on this site. But one thing is for sure, you'll never know until you enter. Your time might be now.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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I enter contests with the mindset that I won't win. I completely get where you are coming from. Sometimes it's hard to enter them when you know there are so many other talented writers on this site. But one thing is for sure, you'll never know until you enter. Your time might be now.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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Hi ExperiencingLiphe Thanks four review Jus a bit of fun to start the New Year off LOL win some lose some hey Cheers
Comment from Rasmine
I wish we got more than six of the six-star's. I needed to wake up and have a small bit of humor while reviewing. Why am I so tired?
Happy New Year.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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I wish we got more than six of the six-star's. I needed to wake up and have a small bit of humor while reviewing. Why am I so tired?
Happy New Year.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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Hi Rasmine LOL you have made my day Thans so much Fot the great review and I am glad you laughed as this was the intended purpose Thought I would start the year off with a bit of fun Ha Ha Cheers
Comment from Sis Cat
Ha, ha, ha! I know the feeling. This is a humorous poem about FanStory contests. I think it will appeal to any FanStorians who are frustrated over losing contest after contest. Your satori "Please let me win one," is pleading and emphatic.
Thank you for sharing your poem that made me smile. I hope you win this time.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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Ha, ha, ha! I know the feeling. This is a humorous poem about FanStory contests. I think it will appeal to any FanStorians who are frustrated over losing contest after contest. Your satori "Please let me win one," is pleading and emphatic.
Thank you for sharing your poem that made me smile. I hope you win this time.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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Hi Sis Cat Ha Ha Thanks for stopping by to read and review my entry for yet again another contest Really just a bit of cheeky fun to start off the year We will see LOL Cheers
Comment from Bill Schott
This humorous 5-7-5, Brain Dead, has the proper setup and puts out a familiar plea to win something that, in our own mind, seems like a sure thing. We usually only win when we least expect it. Happy New Year and success.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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This humorous 5-7-5, Brain Dead, has the proper setup and puts out a familiar plea to win something that, in our own mind, seems like a sure thing. We usually only win when we least expect it. Happy New Year and success.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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Hi Bill Thanks for your review and to be honest it took me Two minutes to think this up when I saw the contest criteria LOL Just a bit of fun to start off the New Year Hope you had a good one Cheers
Comment from oliver818
Nice poem, haha it's true they are hard to win. You have to maybe slip someone a bribe? Thanks for sharing this funny poem and good luck with the competition
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reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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Nice poem, haha it's true they are hard to win. You have to maybe slip someone a bribe? Thanks for sharing this funny poem and good luck with the competition
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Comment Written 01-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
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Hi Oliver818 Thanks for your review for my Brain Dead poem I had fun with this one and thought I woukd star off the New Year with a bit of humour Have a good 2018 Cheers
