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Pearl

This is a poem about a childhood whim.

9 total reviews 
Comment from Badger_29
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Absolutely brilliant you have over a childhood tail into a magical interesting and very well poem. Use of words like the size of an 8-ball you create images in the mind of the reader, and helpless the feel of things that you were feeling. Very good use of words and emotion.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
    Thanks so much! This is one of my favorites!
Comment from frogbook
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What a great story and with a very fine lesson to be learned also. What a sweet way to find out what is important in life. Wonderful read.

 Comment Written 02-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
    Thank you so much!
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written poem for the rhyming poem contest. You used very good descriptive and rhyming words. You also used very good imagery with the art work. This told a sweet story in the poem! Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
    Thanks so much!
Comment from oliver818
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That's a nice poem, I think it's got a lovely message and one we should all pay attention to. Thanks for sharing this and have yourself a really great day

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 02-Jan-2018
    Thank you!
Comment from Ricky1024
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This is a rhyming poem contest entry based on the beauty of a pearl but not it just any privileges Pearl in the world after all that Daddy will make especially for his little girl rich in semen mg flowed well red road trip to the message from Leah Place good luck with this doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
    Thank you for the review!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks about a childhood whim in a lighter scale of appreciation, everything wanted and got but in a restricted manner from a not so rich family, then came pearl, love and pearl of wisdom better, get a wooden pearl, moral lesson from father; I liked. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
    I'm glad you liked it, it's one of my favorites and I was excited to share it with other writers! Thanks for the review!
Comment from Sharon Meda
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This is a good entry for the 'Rhyming Poem' writing prompt.
Well written, well rhymed.
And the picture is beautiful.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
    Thank you! I'm excited to have found FanStory today, and excited to share my work. Thanks for the review!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Such a lovely beautiful story about a homemade pearl that brought a child a lot of happiness, your rhyming is spot on and your poem a joy to read, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
    Thank you! I'm excited to share, and glad you liked it! Thanks so much for the review!
Comment from zanya
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A poem that is not only pleasant to read, telling a tale as well but also unfurls a little life lesson by the end,' in my heart this pearl of wisdom will always stay'......thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
    Thank you! Thanks for the kind review!