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G, day Mate: Happy New Year

Greetins from Down Under

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Comment from Heather Knight
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Very funny, Christine. But I have to say the glossary at the bottom helped a lot...
I think in this line:
Instead, I'm just an Ocker whose 'True Blue', it should say who's instead of whose.
Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
    hi Maria Thanks for your review and I think you are right with Whose but in this poem it is deliberate as that is how you would say it in Aussie speak Glad the glossary helped and I do hope you had a Great New year All the best for 2018
    Cheers Christine
reply by Heather Knight on 01-Jan-2018
    I also hope you have a great new year. Cheers.
Comment from lyenochka
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Happy New Year to you! Thanks for the poem in real 'strine - (is that right?) I like that we have so many different types of English represented here. Hope this New Year will give you many happy events to write about!

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
    Hi Lyenochka, Thanks for reading Ha Ha Yes it is mostly 'strine' and australian sayings. Just a bit of fun for the new year. Hope yours is a Good one Many Cheers for your lovely support Christine Happy New Year
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks Aussie Humour at each word of expression and I also like use of Aussie Strine, diction is birdie like and I enjoyed the feeling exposed; DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
    Hi DR ALCREATOR, Thanks for stopping by for a frothy LOL A bot of good fun Aussie Humour for the New Year Have A good one Happy New Year and ypur support is appreciated Cheers Christine
Comment from BeasPeas
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What is that charming critter? Is it an ostrich? I think I followed the gist of your yabba, a poem with your Aussie spin on the words. I find it fascinating that we may all speak the same language but use words so differently. Happy New Year back to you. Marilyn

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
    Hi Marilyn No this is Australian Emu very similar to the Ostrich but definitely and Aussie Emu one ouf our native birds and also on our Australian emblem with the Kangaroo. Thanks for reading and I have now put on the meaning for the words and phrases used. I had difficultly last nigh to put this on and could only use my IPhone so I have finished it today LOL Any way Hope ypu had a Great New Year . Ha Ha The race is on Cheers Christine
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written poem about New Year. We entered the year 2018 about twenty minutes ago here in South Africa.

Happy new year to you and your family.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017
    Well then Sandra Happy New Year
    Many Cheers fom me to you
    Av a good one
    Christine x
Comment from Bucketlist
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Emu had me snoockered there for a min.but she'll be apples mate, fair dinkum will prevail. The English will get hammered, the Irish sober until the next drink on the bar, the Scots for someone else to pay. The Aussies raise hell. So have at it Christine, raise your glass to friends, family God, and have a great 2018
Hugs, Trisha

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
    Hi Trisha Yes you say it all but this Aussie and and Husband did not raise hell LOL in bed by 10pm LOL a busy day doing nothing on holiday bit I did hear the fireworks Ha Ha Hope youhad a good on
    HappyNewYear
    Thanks for reading and reviewing You support is so much appreciated
    Cheers Christine
Comment from aryr
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This was so well done Christine. Wishing you a Happy New Years as well. It is noon here on Dec 31/17 so we are still building up to it but we will get there lol. I loved the picture and the use of the local language- I am thankful that another writer has bonded with me and I have learned so much and have probably asked some silly questions, but received great answers. This was very enjoyable and endearing. Thank you so much.

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
    Hi Ary Thank you for reading and recoewing my NYE poem
    A bit of fun to herald in theNew Year and I Thank you so much forcypur lpvely support for my work and alwaus value your reviews very much
    It is nice to have fS friends and ai count tpu one of mine
    May we both have a Great 2018 with plenty of new writing and fu
    Happy New Year
    Cheers Christine xx
reply by aryr on 01-Jan-2018
    You are most welcome Christine, I have enjoyed making new friends here in FS.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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Thank you for sharing your Aussie humor and Strine.
Well written and well read.
Thank you for sharing and happy new year to you.
Sharon

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
    Hi Sharon Thank you very much for yoircrevoew for my NYE piece and Hope ypi have Great one also and Thanlls for your lovely support over 2018 and all the best for 2018
    Cheers Christine
Comment from misscookie
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I must say it was a very interesting work of art
You had my attention from the first line to the last
may You have a safe and blessed and Happy New years
Cookie

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
    Hi Cookie How lovely to hear from you and Thanks for reading and reviewing my poem for the New Year and may you have a great 2018
    cheers Christine
reply by misscookie on 01-Jan-2018
    You're very welcome, it was my pleasure.
    Take care.
    Cookie
Comment from royowen
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I think you're trying bamboozle our yank friends up north, of course we sail into January first about eight hours before England and thirteen hours before New York, well done dear Christine, happy new year Christine, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 31-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
    Hi Roy U bettcha I am LOL Had trouble fetting this one in timebut have now polished it up and include an explanation of terms For those less
    Enlightened LOL CheersRoy
    And
    See you in 2018
    Cheers Christine
reply by royowen on 01-Jan-2018
    Well done.