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A Sedoka

3 total reviews 
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 'Behind The Door' writing prompt.
You have a clear message here. Well written.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 01-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 01-Jan-2018
    Hello Sharon, I am pleased to read your wonderful review; thank you very much for visiting.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks a humour in the midst of preparation for a sex but at the absolute moment the alarm chimed, not again, now a temporary break; I liked. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
    Hello my friend, I appreciate your visit and the wonderful review, thank you very much and a very happy New Year to you.
Comment from Poetic Friend
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This is just too hilarious. It was just a dream, and the alarm took you away from the dream. Touch the snooze button and return to the dream. After you wake up, write another poem. lol.

Thank you for the laughter. This poem has winning potential. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
    Hello Friend, I am pleased that you like the poem and found it hilarious; appreciate your time and the encouraging review; thank you very much and a very happy New Year to you.