Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This is a linked and identifiable experience, feeling the status of cacophony, as author explored and expressed in diversifications and how author controls dire consequence; I liked. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 31-Dec-2017

Thanks for the read and the review.

Comment from Brigitte Elko

Excellent

I heard the noise and the frantic movements of the author. This was the purpose of this contest entry. Well written and an easy read.
Good luck in the contest.
Happy New Year!
Brigitte

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017

Thank you for the read and the review.

reply by Brigitte Elko on 30-Dec-2017

My pleasure.
Brigitte

Comment from John A Catania

Poor

Needs more work, there is no rhythmic pattern. Pull deeper from the heart speak more true. But we are all on our ways.We all have room for improvement.

 Comment Written 30-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017

Thanks for your suggestion.