Bad Restaurants
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Comment from artisart4u
Yes, that is the way it is sometimes. I like the last five lines. I can see this happening.
Talking about pain and suffering. Most of the times you are in a time frame.
This is reality. But we keep going back.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Yes, that is the way it is sometimes. I like the last five lines. I can see this happening.
Talking about pain and suffering. Most of the times you are in a time frame.
This is reality. But we keep going back.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Wow! Thank you so much for such a great review, I really appreciate it.
Comment from Ricky1024
Good restaurants in not funny writing prompt person seems Wells and reread well flood well but no grammar is she supposed to be objective and subjective contents were both excellent skip to measure from when he plays good luck in the contest dr. Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Good restaurants in not funny writing prompt person seems Wells and reread well flood well but no grammar is she supposed to be objective and subjective contents were both excellent skip to measure from when he plays good luck in the contest dr. Ricky 1024
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem, I really appreciate it.
Comment from RodG
This is a fitting entry to this contest, but I can imagine the experience was never FUNNY at the time for you. I have had bad food and bad service, but never ALL this at one time in a restaurant. Good use of rhyme to give your poem levity (to fulfill requirements of the prompt. Did you really pay the whole bill and NOT complain vociferously?
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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This is a fitting entry to this contest, but I can imagine the experience was never FUNNY at the time for you. I have had bad food and bad service, but never ALL this at one time in a restaurant. Good use of rhyme to give your poem levity (to fulfill requirements of the prompt. Did you really pay the whole bill and NOT complain vociferously?
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Thanks for the nice review. It WAS a very busy night, and I did pay the bill but complained to the manager the next day. He apologized and said he would be sending me certificates for free food. So its all good.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about your very bad experience at a local restaurant. It is very bad that the Restaurant let you still pay for the food after complaining. I once complained and the restaurant owner make the bill free of charge.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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A very well-written poem about your very bad experience at a local restaurant. It is very bad that the Restaurant let you still pay for the food after complaining. I once complained and the restaurant owner make the bill free of charge.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your nice review. I did talk to the manager the next day, who apologized and will be sending me certificates for free food.
Comment from John A Catania
Wasn't a big fan seemed more like comedic attention than that a poem. Realism is a large part of poetry but its more bout feeling and release than comedy, don't get me wrong comedy can be funny poetry. yet can over due it and ruin ones reading experience. i felt as is i were reading a resteraunt review.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Wasn't a big fan seemed more like comedic attention than that a poem. Realism is a large part of poetry but its more bout feeling and release than comedy, don't get me wrong comedy can be funny poetry. yet can over due it and ruin ones reading experience. i felt as is i were reading a resteraunt review.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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I respect your opinion, although I feel that the prompt called for a funny account of something not funny at the time, so I humbly disagree with your assessment. Thanks for taking the time to review, I appreciate it.
Comment from Trudi Perkins
Too funny and so real. This happens to the best of us and when it does it sure sucks.Well written and by the way you tipped too much.It should of been air.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Too funny and so real. This happens to the best of us and when it does it sure sucks.Well written and by the way you tipped too much.It should of been air.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Thank you for such a nice review. I always appreciate hearing from fellow writers.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good entry for the 'Not Funny, But Funny' writing prompt.
You've done an excellent job on the cute poem.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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This is a good entry for the 'Not Funny, But Funny' writing prompt.
You've done an excellent job on the cute poem.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much, I really appreciate your taking time to read and review my poem.
