Happy New Year
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Comment from rama devi
Lovely prayer poem, with sincere wishes for all. May God bless you with the very same wishes! I liked all the S sounds in your first stanza. the only critique is your use of caps on all lines but then not on the two lines starting with FOR. I think those should also be capped (or use sentence style caps everywhere as another alternative). Also, the periods are not required, since you have no other end-line punctuation...and the first period seems, to me, to come in the middle of a sentence, too (continuing on SO).
Love the closing note of Divine Love.
Inspiring.
Happy New Year and Blessings every moment.
Warmly, rd
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Lovely prayer poem, with sincere wishes for all. May God bless you with the very same wishes! I liked all the S sounds in your first stanza. the only critique is your use of caps on all lines but then not on the two lines starting with FOR. I think those should also be capped (or use sentence style caps everywhere as another alternative). Also, the periods are not required, since you have no other end-line punctuation...and the first period seems, to me, to come in the middle of a sentence, too (continuing on SO).
Love the closing note of Divine Love.
Inspiring.
Happy New Year and Blessings every moment.
Warmly, rd
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the nice review, Rama.
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:-)))
Comment from John A Catania
This is more a prayer than a poem. But still very nice. original at least. good job. Next time try a lil harder on the peotic side of poetry it is a release of what people hold close to their hearts
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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This is more a prayer than a poem. But still very nice. original at least. good job. Next time try a lil harder on the peotic side of poetry it is a release of what people hold close to their hearts
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the review, John. However I do think you are unfair in the stars you gave it.
Comment from apky
Your very first lines were exactly the sort that
I would have also chosen - if I could write poetry -
to wish everybody here at FanStory for the New Year:
Having just finished
Another stressful year
Please Lord, bless all
Poets here on Fanstory
Yielding to their wishes
Thanks,
Apky
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Your very first lines were exactly the sort that
I would have also chosen - if I could write poetry -
to wish everybody here at FanStory for the New Year:
Having just finished
Another stressful year
Please Lord, bless all
Poets here on Fanstory
Yielding to their wishes
Thanks,
Apky
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the nice review, apky.
Comment from BeasPeas
Good wishes for the new year. We all have much to look forward to with a clean slate. Your poem is beautifully illustrated and expressed. Much luck in the contest. Marilyn
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
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Good wishes for the new year. We all have much to look forward to with a clean slate. Your poem is beautifully illustrated and expressed. Much luck in the contest. Marilyn
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the review, Marilyn.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good entry for the 'New Year, New Me' writing prompt as well as a lovely prayer for your fellow Fanstorians.
And your beautiful picture truly rings in the New Year.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
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This is a good entry for the 'New Year, New Me' writing prompt as well as a lovely prayer for your fellow Fanstorians.
And your beautiful picture truly rings in the New Year.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the review, Sharon.
Comment from Poetic Friend
Mystery Author,
Thank you so much for this New Year poem. You are so thoughtful to think of the FanStory poets for the new year.
With so many poets with various backgrounds, countries and writing levels, understanding becomes critical.
I wish the same sentiments to you as well.
Happy New Year, Happy New You!
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
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Mystery Author,
Thank you so much for this New Year poem. You are so thoughtful to think of the FanStory poets for the new year.
With so many poets with various backgrounds, countries and writing levels, understanding becomes critical.
I wish the same sentiments to you as well.
Happy New Year, Happy New You!
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
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Thanks for the review. PF
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks prayer to God for His Grace to the poets and members of Fanstory and wish for stress free New Year; let God bless all for the coming year; I liked. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
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This speaks prayer to God for His Grace to the poets and members of Fanstory and wish for stress free New Year; let God bless all for the coming year; I liked. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your review, Dr Alcreator
