Skeezix
He sure changed our lives36 total reviews
Comment from apky
If I were one of the older cats, I'd most certainly not want to discuss the subject either. This was a nice little tribute to your foundling and I really enjoyed reading it. It certainly made me laugh, especially when I realised who the little monster actually is!
Oh, he's a funny guy and loves to pull pranks on we who live here. ~ maybe you meant to write it that way on purpose, but grammatically you "pull pranks on us" not on "we"
The older cats watch Skeezix with disdain but tolerate hem(him) because he is a baby.
Happy 2018!
Apky
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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If I were one of the older cats, I'd most certainly not want to discuss the subject either. This was a nice little tribute to your foundling and I really enjoyed reading it. It certainly made me laugh, especially when I realised who the little monster actually is!
Oh, he's a funny guy and loves to pull pranks on we who live here. ~ maybe you meant to write it that way on purpose, but grammatically you "pull pranks on us" not on "we"
The older cats watch Skeezix with disdain but tolerate hem(him) because he is a baby.
Happy 2018!
Apky
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Thanks for your catch in the spelling. I will edit and fix. Glad you like our Skeezix.
Comment from humpwhistle
I've cared for a series a feral cats over the years. I've never found one young and trusting enough to bring inside. But I feed them regularly, and they reward me by bringing their friends to my all-day buffet.
I can imagine what a joy it is to have this bundle of mischief in your home.
Very compelling story.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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I've cared for a series a feral cats over the years. I've never found one young and trusting enough to bring inside. But I feed them regularly, and they reward me by bringing their friends to my all-day buffet.
I can imagine what a joy it is to have this bundle of mischief in your home.
Very compelling story.
Best of luck.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Thank you. Almost any kitten will respond to love and good care. I now have seven house cats and all were abandoned along our road.
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Alas, I rarely see a true kitten. The cats that come to my door are too wary to be touched. Still I forge relationships. Enough that they trust me enough to bring other strays to my buffet.
Comment from c_lucas
Dogs and cats make the best pets, but their personalities are as different as day and night. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Dogs and cats make the best pets, but their personalities are as different as day and night. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Thank you. Each animal has its own unique personality. It is what makes them so much fun.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about a new kitten in the house, always up to some mischief knowingly or unknowingly. But the little monsters stay loveable.
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The older cats watch Skeezix with disdain but tolerate hem(him) because he
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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A very well-written poem about a new kitten in the house, always up to some mischief knowingly or unknowingly. But the little monsters stay loveable.
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The older cats watch Skeezix with disdain but tolerate hem(him) because he
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Thanks for the catch in my spelling. I will edit and correct.
Comment from Dean Kuch
A monster dwells within our house. Strange noises echo in the night; it sounds as if a herd of horses is galloping up and down the stairway and across the upstairs floor. There is a thumping and bumping under our bed ... They make a spray to deal with those pesky monsters you know. It's called, oddly enough, "Monster Spray", and comes in 14 oz. cans.
You must be very careful when using it, however. If any of the over-spray accidentally gets on another living thing, the consequences can be devastating.
Cats are smart animals and the way Skeezix sucked up to and buttered up your husband is perfect example of just how smart.
Good story. It's always nice to know there are still good folks out there like yourself who are willing to give a poor, defenseless animal a good home. What they give us in return is priceless.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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A monster dwells within our house. Strange noises echo in the night; it sounds as if a herd of horses is galloping up and down the stairway and across the upstairs floor. There is a thumping and bumping under our bed ... They make a spray to deal with those pesky monsters you know. It's called, oddly enough, "Monster Spray", and comes in 14 oz. cans.
You must be very careful when using it, however. If any of the over-spray accidentally gets on another living thing, the consequences can be devastating.
Cats are smart animals and the way Skeezix sucked up to and buttered up your husband is perfect example of just how smart.
Good story. It's always nice to know there are still good folks out there like yourself who are willing to give a poor, defenseless animal a good home. What they give us in return is priceless.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Thank you, Dean. Now you wouldn't want me to use that spray on my little Skeezix would you? LOL
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Oh, no!
It's for monsters and in reality I don't believe that Skeezix is a monster at all.
~Dean ;)
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I enjoyed this piece. It is well written with an engaging tone.
Not a cat fan personally. I shared a house with a friend who had one and it kept leaving shrews and severed rabbit's heads in my slippers and on the stairs... monsters indeed.
Wouldn't like to see them abandoned though. I'll bet the older cats secretly enjoy it...lol
Nice take on the competition.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Hi there,
I enjoyed this piece. It is well written with an engaging tone.
Not a cat fan personally. I shared a house with a friend who had one and it kept leaving shrews and severed rabbit's heads in my slippers and on the stairs... monsters indeed.
Wouldn't like to see them abandoned though. I'll bet the older cats secretly enjoy it...lol
Nice take on the competition.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Thanks. The cat was just trying to show you he liked you by bringing you food. You mean you didn't appreciate it?
Comment from Ogden
Not a monster, and not a mystery, but a nice story about the effects a new kitten had on an elderly couple and their grownup cats.
If you were to ask me, I'd suggest beginning the story with "I found him while walking down the road one day," and then adding the background info you tell in the notes, and plenty of the newcomer's antics.
But you didn't ask.
Happy New Year to you and your hubby!
Don (aka Ogden)
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Not a monster, and not a mystery, but a nice story about the effects a new kitten had on an elderly couple and their grownup cats.
If you were to ask me, I'd suggest beginning the story with "I found him while walking down the road one day," and then adding the background info you tell in the notes, and plenty of the newcomer's antics.
But you didn't ask.
Happy New Year to you and your hubby!
Don (aka Ogden)
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Nope, I didn't ask, but I appreciate the suggestion anyway. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Oh well, I tried to be helpful. I hope you weren't offended.
Best wishes for a happy, healthy 2018!
Don
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Of course, I wasn't offended. Reviewers are supposed to make suggestions and catch errors. I appreciate each and every one of you.
Comment from Sugarray77
I love this. What a cute story about your kitten. The playful thing is clearly up to kitty hi jinx! I liked your descriptions and humor. It was a well-balanced narrative with a great theme. Good job.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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I love this. What a cute story about your kitten. The playful thing is clearly up to kitty hi jinx! I liked your descriptions and humor. It was a well-balanced narrative with a great theme. Good job.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Thank you for reading and commenting. I really didn't want a kitten at our age, but what else could I do. We love Skeezix anyway.
Comment from MelB
he older cats watch Skeezix with disdain but tolerate hem because he is a baby. - (him) because he is a baby.
So glad you rescued them all, especially little Skeezix. They are very smart and do what they need to do to win over your heart. I've rescued every cat I've ever owned. They just seem to show up every few years.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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he older cats watch Skeezix with disdain but tolerate hem because he is a baby. - (him) because he is a baby.
So glad you rescued them all, especially little Skeezix. They are very smart and do what they need to do to win over your heart. I've rescued every cat I've ever owned. They just seem to show up every few years.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Same here. We have seven house cats and all were abandoned by our farm at one time or another. Thanks for reading and commenting. Thanks for the catch in my spelling too.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks a story around the cat Skeezix found and rescued, and it is a matter of grace that a cat could save the life of the author as she wishes to live the life of a cat 90 years; I liked the compact and interesting work. DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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This speaks a story around the cat Skeezix found and rescued, and it is a matter of grace that a cat could save the life of the author as she wishes to live the life of a cat 90 years; I liked the compact and interesting work. DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Thank you. It's not that I particularly want to live to be 90, I have to so I can care for the kitten. LOL
