Freckled Face
Thaaaaat's Me.5 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Delightful. Fresh and clever--I can see why you got the prize! What an original piece. Charming--made my day. Cheers and chuckles right back at you. LIZ
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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Delightful. Fresh and clever--I can see why you got the prize! What an original piece. Charming--made my day. Cheers and chuckles right back at you. LIZ
Comment Written 29-Mar-2020
reply by the author on 29-Mar-2020
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HELLO LIZ: WOW! I don't know how you found, FRECKLED FACE. That poem is as old as I...and I'm as old as water. LOL. Thank you, Liz. That poem was one of my most fun poems. It's published. I'm glad you liked it. Liz...I think this review is going to make you and me friends. You've got me chortling and chuckling. You are a good lady, Liz. Ha Ha...see ya next time, my friend. God bless you, Liz. CORDIALLY: rhonnie69.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello rhonnie69
I see you were awarded 2nd place with your poem with such a happy girl who loved her self even if she had freckles on her face and braces on her teeth , but I got a feeling she was defending herself when you said-
The ones under my eyes,
I named them Tears.
NO! They don't mean that I'm crying,
I laugh at their defying
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Hello rhonnie69
I see you were awarded 2nd place with your poem with such a happy girl who loved her self even if she had freckles on her face and braces on her teeth , but I got a feeling she was defending herself when you said-
The ones under my eyes,
I named them Tears.
NO! They don't mean that I'm crying,
I laugh at their defying
Comment Written 27-Mar-2018
Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a well written piece for the 'Not Funny But Funny' writing prompt.
A story well told in your poem.
The artwork is lovely as well.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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This is a well written piece for the 'Not Funny But Funny' writing prompt.
A story well told in your poem.
The artwork is lovely as well.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
Comment from patcelaw
A face without freckles is like a nighttime sky without stars. Now how boring is that. This was a fun read and not silly at all. Good luck in the contest. Blessings for a happy and health new year. Patricia
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A face without freckles is like a nighttime sky without stars. Now how boring is that. This was a fun read and not silly at all. Good luck in the contest. Blessings for a happy and health new year. Patricia
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
Comment from brenda faye curtis
This is a cute poem to go with the clever one who wrote it! Personally, I don't think freckles are unattractive. They can be very attractive, and remember, God put them there for a reason! The poem is clever, highly descriptive, and I just like it. Well done!
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This is a cute poem to go with the clever one who wrote it! Personally, I don't think freckles are unattractive. They can be very attractive, and remember, God put them there for a reason! The poem is clever, highly descriptive, and I just like it. Well done!
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
