Dreaming
Three line poem4 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
I like this very much. Because it is a 3 line poem and fifteen syllables, the writer must be careful to 'deliver' a punch in a few words. You did that very well. Good job. Good luck!
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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I like this very much. Because it is a 3 line poem and fifteen syllables, the writer must be careful to 'deliver' a punch in a few words. You did that very well. Good job. Good luck!
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2017
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Thanks so much for the read and the comments.
Comment from Jesse James Doty
Too bad this is fantasy poetry for you. I experience, what you describe so eloquently, in real life. I am very fortunate to engage in lucid dreaming, where I not only observe what is happening but, can change, at will, the outcome of the dream. Maybe you do too? You write about "crafting blissful, fanciful dreams," which to me sounds like you have some control over what you dream. Although, you call it fantasy poetry, so I'm not sure about that. Your Author's notes show to me that you're into rules a lot. I'm not so much. Excellent poem with wonderfully delicious descriptions of dreaming and all that it has to offer. I'm assuming your photo, is your fantasy, of a lovely woman sleeping peacefully. Nice touch. Thanks for taking me for a ride in your dream machine.
Take care, Jesse
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
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Too bad this is fantasy poetry for you. I experience, what you describe so eloquently, in real life. I am very fortunate to engage in lucid dreaming, where I not only observe what is happening but, can change, at will, the outcome of the dream. Maybe you do too? You write about "crafting blissful, fanciful dreams," which to me sounds like you have some control over what you dream. Although, you call it fantasy poetry, so I'm not sure about that. Your Author's notes show to me that you're into rules a lot. I'm not so much. Excellent poem with wonderfully delicious descriptions of dreaming and all that it has to offer. I'm assuming your photo, is your fantasy, of a lovely woman sleeping peacefully. Nice touch. Thanks for taking me for a ride in your dream machine.
Take care, Jesse
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
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Hey Jesse,
Thank you for the thoughtful review and sharing your ability to create dreams. I am not so lucky, but I can dream can't I?
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Yes, you can!
Comment from antonieta
Hi,
You fullfilled the contest's rules. In addition, you used several important figurative language devices such as consonance and assonance, plus imagery in such a short poem. Thanks for sharing,
Antonieta
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
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Hi,
You fullfilled the contest's rules. In addition, you used several important figurative language devices such as consonance and assonance, plus imagery in such a short poem. Thanks for sharing,
Antonieta
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your encouraging review.
Comment from patcelaw
This is a great poem for the contest, Good luck in the contest. May your new year be a healthy and happy one. I have some computer problems which we are having trouble resolving. But, I can review and earn member dollars. Patricia
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
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This is a great poem for the contest, Good luck in the contest. May your new year be a healthy and happy one. I have some computer problems which we are having trouble resolving. But, I can review and earn member dollars. Patricia
Comment Written 29-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your review. Hope you get your computer under control.
