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Confederate Star

A Southern Favorite

8 total reviews 
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello author
I didn't realize the Confederate Star
((From what State)) does the Jasmine flower fills the air with such a sweet scent
Happy New year.
Gert

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
    Thanks so much!!
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
    Thanks so much!!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-5 Flower writing prompt.
Well written, and I love the picture that you have posted with it.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
    Thanks so much!!
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
    Thanks so much!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written 5-7-5. A tribute to Jasmine the Confederate star. A beautiful flower and an extraordinary scent. It is a pleasure to have them in the garden.

 Comment Written 29-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
    Thank you so much!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks about the southern favourite flower and its essence, jasmine sweet smells and its smell fills the air and makes summer breeze sweet and fragrant; I liked. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
    Thanks so much!
Comment from Wetbelly01
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Oh yeah, what a good choice for this contest.....
Many a time I sat out on the back porch...
mellowing out from a hectic day,
but smelling that scent of Jasmine,
done took my blues away!...
To bad you can't make that smell come out....
It would blow the voters away!.... Good Luck!!

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
    Haha. That?s great. Thanks so much!
Comment from Dean Kuch
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Your 5-7-5 entry for this contest is very well written and presented, Anonymous Poet.
Jasmine and Honeysuckle are two of my favorite outdoor scents.
Your use of capitalization and punctuation in this shows that you obviously know the difference between 5-7-5 poetry and haiku.
This is perfect.
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 Comment Written 28-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 29-Dec-2017
    Thanks so much!
reply by Dean Kuch on 29-Dec-2017
    You're welcome.
    I hope my vote helps too!
Comment from MSJVClarke
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That's a nice, well-written 5-7-5. I did not know there was a Confederate Star jasmine. Your syllable count is correct and your world flow smoothly. A short but expressive piece of work.

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017
    Thank you so much!!
Comment from Ricky1024
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This is the 575 writing contest prompt about flowers well-written rich and seem as well as imagery flu while Red Robin of grammar issues ejective an object of contents were excellent and descriptive measures firmly in place thanks for this and good luck in the contest dr. Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017
    Thank you.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017
    Thank you.