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Comment from Tim0443
Your ability to articulate the question of the ages is profound. The ever changing course of religion, evidence of man's depravity, will always lead you astray. Sailors used to navigate using the North Star. Navigating the vast sky of religious turmoil is much the same. You must find the one point of light which remains constant and does not move, and chart your life's course.
Romans 1:16-20
Romans 2:11-15
Romans 3:19-31
Galatians 3:19-26
Romans 5:1-8
Romans 10:8-13
Romans 6:8-11
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Your ability to articulate the question of the ages is profound. The ever changing course of religion, evidence of man's depravity, will always lead you astray. Sailors used to navigate using the North Star. Navigating the vast sky of religious turmoil is much the same. You must find the one point of light which remains constant and does not move, and chart your life's course.
Romans 1:16-20
Romans 2:11-15
Romans 3:19-31
Galatians 3:19-26
Romans 5:1-8
Romans 10:8-13
Romans 6:8-11
Comment Written 04-Feb-2018
Comment from nbonner
My faith is tested everyday. I have no doubt God is watching over me so I walk in His grace and blindly in His faith daily. I'm not here to tell you what to believe but God believes in you even if you don't (my belief). I thought this was and excellent write and a great topic that I think most people go through in their minds everyday. Thank you for writing this and Happy New Year! NB
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My faith is tested everyday. I have no doubt God is watching over me so I walk in His grace and blindly in His faith daily. I'm not here to tell you what to believe but God believes in you even if you don't (my belief). I thought this was and excellent write and a great topic that I think most people go through in their minds everyday. Thank you for writing this and Happy New Year! NB
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
Comment from Zue65
The last stanza of your poem is the clincher of your poem, the message that leaves an eternal question on the minds of the readers. I dare not however fathom truth which my mind cannot comprehend and just leave everything to God. In the end, there is no real harm in believing God. God bless.
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The last stanza of your poem is the clincher of your poem, the message that leaves an eternal question on the minds of the readers. I dare not however fathom truth which my mind cannot comprehend and just leave everything to God. In the end, there is no real harm in believing God. God bless.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Tom, Great poem but sorry I can't help you because I am in the same boat. Not to worry, one way or another we will find out on that one journey which we must all make alone - be brave and Happy New Year.
The greatest minds have spoken out,
Regarding God's reality;
The essence of what God's about
In grandiose soliloquy. ............................ even they don't know. Dorothy x
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Hi Tom, Great poem but sorry I can't help you because I am in the same boat. Not to worry, one way or another we will find out on that one journey which we must all make alone - be brave and Happy New Year.
The greatest minds have spoken out,
Regarding God's reality;
The essence of what God's about
In grandiose soliloquy. ............................ even they don't know. Dorothy x
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
Nice job with this piece. Belief and faith do not necessarily make the same conclusion, or frequently the same road.
There are so many questions out there in regard to religion, faith and belief. So many are indoctrinated from an early age - that's not belief, that's brainwashing - exposure.
In schools they call it religious education but is it education to teach only one?
Good format and flow in this searching piece.
GMG
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Hi there,
Nice job with this piece. Belief and faith do not necessarily make the same conclusion, or frequently the same road.
There are so many questions out there in regard to religion, faith and belief. So many are indoctrinated from an early age - that's not belief, that's brainwashing - exposure.
In schools they call it religious education but is it education to teach only one?
Good format and flow in this searching piece.
GMG
Comment Written 31-Dec-2017
Comment from oliver818
This is a very nice poem about belief, I enjoyed it. It flows well and the ending is great. Belief requires some outside input and you sum that up very well in the final
Line. Thanks for sharing and have yourself a really great day
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This is a very nice poem about belief, I enjoyed it. It flows well and the ending is great. Belief requires some outside input and you sum that up very well in the final
Line. Thanks for sharing and have yourself a really great day
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
Comment from artisart4u
That our God is real. He's in everything from the beginning of time to the present. He provides and protect you, He will never leave you or forsake you, just believe him. From the rich man to the poor if you have faith enough to walk and talk with God, you will see his good work in your life.
I think belief is knowing who God is, and practice what Jesus said in our daily lives.
This very well written. Good luck.
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That our God is real. He's in everything from the beginning of time to the present. He provides and protect you, He will never leave you or forsake you, just believe him. From the rich man to the poor if you have faith enough to walk and talk with God, you will see his good work in your life.
I think belief is knowing who God is, and practice what Jesus said in our daily lives.
This very well written. Good luck.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a profound message, clearly rendered about faith and its idiosyncrasies - destined to both entice and address faith and its mysteries - beautiful in its perfect and even rhyme and smooth rhythm - a poem for the ages - best of luck in the contest...
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In my opinion, a profound message, clearly rendered about faith and its idiosyncrasies - destined to both entice and address faith and its mysteries - beautiful in its perfect and even rhyme and smooth rhythm - a poem for the ages - best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
Comment from dragonpoet
So many questions that need answering in this smooth flowing rhyming poem. I think if we could understand man and how to change the violent man into a peaceful one then we may get closer to totally understanding God. Faith is hard to define that is why it is faith.
Good luck in the contest. Keep writing. Happy New Year.
Joan
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So many questions that need answering in this smooth flowing rhyming poem. I think if we could understand man and how to change the violent man into a peaceful one then we may get closer to totally understanding God. Faith is hard to define that is why it is faith.
Good luck in the contest. Keep writing. Happy New Year.
Joan
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
Comment from R56Ma3
When we plant seed and believe God can do it it has to be faith. sometimes easier said than done, that is just a mind set we need to get out of. Faith is the substance of all things hoped for. Excellent job! R56ma3
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When we plant seed and believe God can do it it has to be faith. sometimes easier said than done, that is just a mind set we need to get out of. Faith is the substance of all things hoped for. Excellent job! R56ma3
Comment Written 30-Dec-2017
