Comment from angel123

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your spiritual poem. It flows and rhymes well with good alliteration of w, and h letters and sounds. I really like your last stanza and your artwork choice. Good luck in the contest and Best wishes!

Angel123

 Comment Written 28-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Dec-2017

Thanks for the read and the encouraging words. I love hearing from an angel.

Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

This is a Christmas in the Ron contest entry well-written rich and seem as well as imagery flowed well read well and no grammar issue so speak ejective content grease objective content the script to measure square excellent and then place also thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017

Thanks for the read and the comments though I did not completely understand.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

This is a good entry for the 'Christ in a Rhyme' writing prompt.
Well done and the beautiful picture is a good match.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 23-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2017

Thanks for the read and the comments.