Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

This is a good entry for the 'Write a Modern Fable' writing prompt.
Well told, funny, well done.
Good luck to you with the competition and Merry Christmas.
Sharon

 Comment Written 25-Dec-2017

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

That's very true, Mystery Author.
Like an egg, you can hatch a plan but nothing gets cookin' unless you add some heat.
This is a fun, well written story and one both kids and adults could enjoy.
Merry Christmas.

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2017

Comment from Wetbelly01

Excellent

Oh yeah! This seems to be a good one for the "Fable Contest" alright....
I like the concept... And the moral at the end is so true!....
Wouldn't have you change a thing! Well Done!

 Comment Written 20-Dec-2017