Watching Her Journey
being with a friend when she died18 total reviews
Comment from Hitcher
Watching some one go is a double-edged sword, you feel privileged to be part of it but devastated when they pass. The memories you have of them will never fade though for to share their end makes you remember their beginning or when they came into your life. Nice!
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Watching some one go is a double-edged sword, you feel privileged to be part of it but devastated when they pass. The memories you have of them will never fade though for to share their end makes you remember their beginning or when they came into your life. Nice!
Comment Written 19-Dec-2017
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi you notes are sad, very sad indeed. The writing I'd so full of pathos. Losing someone dear can be hard, and it takes time to heal.
Be strong.
Danny Jock
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Hi you notes are sad, very sad indeed. The writing I'd so full of pathos. Losing someone dear can be hard, and it takes time to heal.
Be strong.
Danny Jock
Comment Written 19-Dec-2017
Comment from Neonewman
Beautifully crafted my friend. The loss of a friend can be quite devastating. I love the way you have presented the ending. "But always remember
the one that we miss
has greeted The Father
and wears His sweet kiss. "
God bless!
Steve
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Beautifully crafted my friend. The loss of a friend can be quite devastating. I love the way you have presented the ending. "But always remember
the one that we miss
has greeted The Father
and wears His sweet kiss. "
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 18-Dec-2017
Comment from tara-jade
beautifully written, I am sorry for your loss. your friend would be proud.
the format and flow of words is great no work needs to be done.
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beautifully written, I am sorry for your loss. your friend would be proud.
the format and flow of words is great no work needs to be done.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2017
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a beautifully written and presented eulogic and plaintive rendering of a sad event - fluid in both rhythm and gentle rhyme and smooth in the read...
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In my opinion, a beautifully written and presented eulogic and plaintive rendering of a sad event - fluid in both rhythm and gentle rhyme and smooth in the read...
Comment Written 17-Dec-2017
Comment from zanya
Yes thanks for sharing some of the powerful emotion that accompanies such catacyclsmic life moments .....not easy to describe......your heart fills with sadness.....
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Yes thanks for sharing some of the powerful emotion that accompanies such catacyclsmic life moments .....not easy to describe......your heart fills with sadness.....
Comment Written 17-Dec-2017
Comment from Bichon
Beautiful poem. The words have such meaning to them, and reflect feelings. I am very sorry to hear about your friend and your husband.
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Beautiful poem. The words have such meaning to them, and reflect feelings. I am very sorry to hear about your friend and your husband.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2017
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
This is so tragic but beautifully written it is amazing that you lost two people so close to you and I feel for you deeply and immensely a wonderful poem which brims with emotion well done kind regards Meia xx
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This is so tragic but beautifully written it is amazing that you lost two people so close to you and I feel for you deeply and immensely a wonderful poem which brims with emotion well done kind regards Meia xx
Comment Written 17-Dec-2017
Comment from rockinm76233
So sorry for your loss. Been there and done that and there absolutely are no words to express the grief that surrounds you and engulfs your very soul.
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So sorry for your loss. Been there and done that and there absolutely are no words to express the grief that surrounds you and engulfs your very soul.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2017
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. It is very hard to watch a lived one deteriorate in front of our eyes because of a terminal illness where we cannot do anyrhing to help them or prolong their lives.
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A very well-written poem. It is very hard to watch a lived one deteriorate in front of our eyes because of a terminal illness where we cannot do anyrhing to help them or prolong their lives.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2017
