A Cool Operator
5-7-5 Ode to Winter9 total reviews
Comment from BermyBye50
A bold and sensual write. The scene is set with each line as it leaves very little to one's imagination. Well done.
All the best in the contest.
Eugene
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A bold and sensual write. The scene is set with each line as it leaves very little to one's imagination. Well done.
All the best in the contest.
Eugene
Comment Written 16-Dec-2017
Comment from nordicgirl
This is a pretty steamy winter poem. You're rather slick to use winter to your advantage like this. I bet you aren't getting any complaints though. Here's to a long winter. Hehehe. NG
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This is a pretty steamy winter poem. You're rather slick to use winter to your advantage like this. I bet you aren't getting any complaints though. Here's to a long winter. Hehehe. NG
Comment Written 14-Dec-2017
Comment from Dean Kuch
Nice work with this 'Ode To Winter' contest entry, Michael. Very nice.
Your presentation is as lovely as the words used to adorn the picture. It certainly evokes those "warm & fuzzies" readers here seem to be so fond of, despite the rather frigid topic.
Well done and good luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
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Nice work with this 'Ode To Winter' contest entry, Michael. Very nice.
Your presentation is as lovely as the words used to adorn the picture. It certainly evokes those "warm & fuzzies" readers here seem to be so fond of, despite the rather frigid topic.
Well done and good luck to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 14-Dec-2017
Comment from despiser
Gee, I wish I were cool like that, but he does melt her heart. I only click on these formats rarely because the review is longer than the poem. So nice work in this format and an original theme.
-D
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Gee, I wish I were cool like that, but he does melt her heart. I only click on these formats rarely because the review is longer than the poem. So nice work in this format and an original theme.
-D
Comment Written 14-Dec-2017
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Ode To Winter prompt.
The picture is a good match as well.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
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I think this is a good entry for the Ode To Winter prompt.
The picture is a good match as well.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 14-Dec-2017
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written ode to winter in 5-7-5 style. In winter we will try to stay warm and cuddle up with our partners. While in summer we avoid too much body contact.
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A very well-written ode to winter in 5-7-5 style. In winter we will try to stay warm and cuddle up with our partners. While in summer we avoid too much body contact.
Comment Written 14-Dec-2017
Comment from dragonpoet
What a cozy sensual scene. Things are always better in front of a fire. Winter can be scary at times and cause you to need the warmth of those around you.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing
Happy Holidays
dragonpoet
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What a cozy sensual scene. Things are always better in front of a fire. Winter can be scary at times and cause you to need the warmth of those around you.
Good luck in the contest
Keep writing
Happy Holidays
dragonpoet
Comment Written 14-Dec-2017
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Yes I can identify with this write especially as I spent a winter in the french alps once with someone I had not long known, it was an exciting and loving time as I remember, warm romantic words here, love Dolly x
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Yes I can identify with this write especially as I spent a winter in the french alps once with someone I had not long known, it was an exciting and loving time as I remember, warm romantic words here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 14-Dec-2017
Comment from Gloria ....
Author, this is a highly romantic take on the smooth operator, or is it cool operation. I don't know. I keep mixing my metaphors and clichés these days.
That said, it's a lovely ode to winter, which is almost impossible to do within the limitations of a fiveseventyfive.
It's a great way to keep your girl captive though. :)) Brrrrrrrrrr.
Superb and best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
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Author, this is a highly romantic take on the smooth operator, or is it cool operation. I don't know. I keep mixing my metaphors and clichés these days.
That said, it's a lovely ode to winter, which is almost impossible to do within the limitations of a fiveseventyfive.
It's a great way to keep your girl captive though. :)) Brrrrrrrrrr.
Superb and best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 14-Dec-2017
