Poor peanut
An assault14 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
Oh this is so cute. Sorry I missed voting in the contest. I think you placed in it, though. Clever and cute. The poor peanut. Well done and amusing. Marilyn
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017
Oh this is so cute. Sorry I missed voting in the contest. I think you placed in it, though. Clever and cute. The poor peanut. Well done and amusing. Marilyn
Comment Written 19-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017
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Many thanks. It came third.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author
Oh yes you had me smiling with you fun play on words assaulted to being over salted
Smiles
Best to you.
Gert
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2017
Hello author
Oh yes you had me smiling with you fun play on words assaulted to being over salted
Smiles
Best to you.
Gert
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2017
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,any thanks
Comment from emptypage
Laughed out loud. Literally.
Funny, great 5-7-5.
If a peanut is injured, does the five second rule still apply? I doubt medical science can help, but maybe you know?
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2017
Laughed out loud. Literally.
Funny, great 5-7-5.
If a peanut is injured, does the five second rule still apply? I doubt medical science can help, but maybe you know?
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2017
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Many thanks
Comment from Dawn Munro
LOL - well, this is certainly clever wordplay, although I am awfully afraid I might be the perpetrator... nothing like high protein and good fibre. Even better when it's a salted peanut. LOL. Good luck.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2017
LOL - well, this is certainly clever wordplay, although I am awfully afraid I might be the perpetrator... nothing like high protein and good fibre. Even better when it's a salted peanut. LOL. Good luck.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much for your great review. Mistake sorry.
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Oh, dear, why the question mark? The fact that I laughed - twice - and rated as I did must assure you I liked it...? (LOL = laugh out loud)
You're welcome. :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fun 5-7-5 poem. A peanut found on the ground was not eaten by a human but laying on the ground where every one steps on him and become very badly injured.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2017
A very well-written fun 5-7-5 poem. A peanut found on the ground was not eaten by a human but laying on the ground where every one steps on him and become very badly injured.
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2017
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Many thanks
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahahahaha!
Oh yeah, this is very good.
Good use of double entendre, a perfect syllable count, and it's actually quite funny too.
You made me laugh and that's good enough for me.
You've got my vote...
~Dean
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2017
Hahahahaha!
Oh yeah, this is very good.
Good use of double entendre, a perfect syllable count, and it's actually quite funny too.
You made me laugh and that's good enough for me.
You've got my vote...
~Dean
Comment Written 12-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2017
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Thank you Dean, you are a star. J.
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You are very welcome. :)
Comment from kathleenspalding
Bwahahaha! Oh, that is SO bad! Clever and witty five - seven - five flows well and gave me a laugh. Thanks for that! Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2017
Bwahahaha! Oh, that is SO bad! Clever and witty five - seven - five flows well and gave me a laugh. Thanks for that! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 12-Dec-2017
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Many thanks. So glad you liked it.
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You're welcome. I did.
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a clever entry for the Just for Fun writing prompt.
A good combination of poem and pun.
Nicely done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2017
I think this is a clever entry for the Just for Fun writing prompt.
A good combination of poem and pun.
Nicely done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 11-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2017
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Many thanks.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a fantastic metaphoric poem I read.
A soldier lying wounded injured on the ground, following an assault.
I liked and enjoyed the visual word imagery.
DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2017
This is a fantastic metaphoric poem I read.
A soldier lying wounded injured on the ground, following an assault.
I liked and enjoyed the visual word imagery.
DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 11-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2017
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Many thanks
Comment from Paul Bownas
Poor peanut! A very clever way to say an awful lot in such a short poem! It is delightful, and very funny. I would now like to hear how you NUT OUT your future verses?
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2017
Poor peanut! A very clever way to say an awful lot in such a short poem! It is delightful, and very funny. I would now like to hear how you NUT OUT your future verses?
Comment Written 11-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2017
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Thank you so much, glad you found it funny