White Landscape
Sleet turning to snow2 total reviews
Comment from Ricky1024
Four Line Poem.
Written well.
And yes good theme and imagery.
Read well, flowed well, with no grammar issues...
As well.
Descriptive Measures were perfect
Dr.Ricky 1024.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
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Four Line Poem.
Written well.
And yes good theme and imagery.
Read well, flowed well, with no grammar issues...
As well.
Descriptive Measures were perfect
Dr.Ricky 1024.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
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Your great review is much appreciated. Thank you Dr. Ricky 1024.
Comment from c_lucas
The noise of a thunderstorm and the silence of a snow fall conflict with each other. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
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The noise of a thunderstorm and the silence of a snow fall conflict with each other. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
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Thank you for your review. Your contrast of a thunderstorm with a snow fall is so true. Snow fell in our area this morning and I was mesmerised by the delicate, silent flakes.
