Haiku(december's cold moon)
Nature Haiku6 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Ooooooooooooh, I FEEL this one. What a great haiku! Your kire is perfect, and the kigo is even mentioned without sounding forced, as it sometimes does when the season is not merely implied. I loved it! (That satori is what we have been experiencing here, in Toronto, lately! *shudder*)
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2017
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Ooooooooooooh, I FEEL this one. What a great haiku! Your kire is perfect, and the kigo is even mentioned without sounding forced, as it sometimes does when the season is not merely implied. I loved it! (That satori is what we have been experiencing here, in Toronto, lately! *shudder*)
Comment Written 18-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2017
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Thanks for this vibrant and interesting and encouraging review !!zanya
Comment from Joan E.
I admired your "steel" simile and metaphor in the satori line. Your rich description in this haiku is accented well by the dramatic picture. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2017
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I admired your "steel" simile and metaphor in the satori line. Your rich description in this haiku is accented well by the dramatic picture. Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 18-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2017
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Delighted with this encouraging review zanya
Comment from BeasPeas
This is very nicely composed, descriptive. It reeks of the coldness of December's steely frozen earth. Every word is well chosen to build an image for the reader in this fine poem. Marilyn
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This is very nicely composed, descriptive. It reeks of the coldness of December's steely frozen earth. Every word is well chosen to build an image for the reader in this fine poem. Marilyn
Comment Written 10-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2017
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Thanks for this encouraging review zanya
Comment from Liberty Justice
"Winter's icy grip," indeed how enchanting as poet paints a picture
of the moon as a cold part of winter shining down on earth as though the grounds looks like steel. Such a short but sweet poet. truly, liberty justice
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"Winter's icy grip," indeed how enchanting as poet paints a picture
of the moon as a cold part of winter shining down on earth as though the grounds looks like steel. Such a short but sweet poet. truly, liberty justice
Comment Written 08-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2017
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Great review -thanks for reading ...most encouraging zanya
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Comment from Sharon Haiste
This is a good entry for the Nature 5-7-5 writing prompt.
The picture is beautiful and a good match.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2017
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This is a good entry for the Nature 5-7-5 writing prompt.
The picture is beautiful and a good match.
Well done and good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from beizanten
a very beautiful picture it suit the more beautiful and well written poetry. your poetry have a beautiful imaginary. i like all three paragraph, you have done great, keep up the great work
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2017
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a very beautiful picture it suit the more beautiful and well written poetry. your poetry have a beautiful imaginary. i like all three paragraph, you have done great, keep up the great work
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2017
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Thanks for reading and critique zanya
