Winter Wonderland
Peaceful moments2 total reviews
Comment from kahpot
What beautiful artwork (picture) with excellent words and poem to describe the scene, with only the stars to guide us, very well done and good luck in your competition****kahpot
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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What beautiful artwork (picture) with excellent words and poem to describe the scene, with only the stars to guide us, very well done and good luck in your competition****kahpot
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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Thank you for such a nice review, it's always appreciated.
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct line . syllable count and nature theme. In terms of haiku (not listed in the rules), the first two lines are connected with a concrete kigo (seasonal reference) but the satori (last line) is more a statement than an aha observation. All the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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This meets the contest requirements nicely with a correct line . syllable count and nature theme. In terms of haiku (not listed in the rules), the first two lines are connected with a concrete kigo (seasonal reference) but the satori (last line) is more a statement than an aha observation. All the best in the voting and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 07-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 08-Dec-2017
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review, it's always appreciated.
