Comment from Sugarray77

Excellent

I love this poem. It evokes, peace, relaxation and a calm night ahead. I hope you write more about situations that offer serenity. Great job. Regards.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Dec-2017

Thank you for the read and the kind words.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks man should go for relaxation or taking rest being relaxed after the sundown, time for enjoying life in tranquil night, maybe eternal; I like. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017

Thanks for the read and the encouraging review.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Hi there;
Thank you for sharing your entry in the five-seven-five Nature contest. It is a bit confusing because it says '5-7-5' and then it also says 'Haiku.' I'm not sure your entry is a true Haiku, but it is definitely a great five-seven-five. Your photo is perfect; I felt the tranquility just looking at it; your words completed the feeling,

~patty~

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017

Thanks for the read. What is needed to be deemed a Haiku?

reply by Mustang Patty on 07-Dec-2017

I am NOT an expert, but I've learned a bit this last year with the help of Gypsy and Dean Kuch and a few others. A haiku has a kigo (hints at the season) and a satori (aha moment)

reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017

Thank you. I will keep in mind.