Comment from jenintorre

Excellent

Hi Kahpot
This is a very good one line poem it says such a lot in very few words. Very true. I love the illustration that you have chosen. I wish you lots of luck in the competition.jen

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017

Thank you very much****kahpot

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

although one line Kahpot your words mean so much and are very thought provoking and it's true what they say. We ARE born screaming but like you say we lose our voice our freedom of speech as we get older. A sad fact of modern society I suppose
Thanks for sharing.
dip

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 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017

Thank you very much, and yes we are not being heard of late****kahpot

Comment from beizanten

Excellent

cute picture. an interesting poetry, the angst just dribbing it. it must bevery hard to write such short and simple poetry but you have done well. best of luck and keep up the great work

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 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017

Thank you very much****kahpot