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Christmas Stolen

A poem as to how I relate when baking special treats.

4 total reviews 
Comment from Brigitte Elko
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This entry is perfectly penned for the contest. The words not forced to comply but naturally flowing with the prompt.
For consistency throughout, change lower case g to capitol G( suggestion for perfection)
It has my vote.
Blessings,
Brigitte

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2017
    Oh thank you so much! I had fun with this one and I will take your suggestion and work it into the poem. Thanks again!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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This is a good poem for the Abecdarian writing prompt entry.
The recipe idea is a good one, thank you for sharing.
Good luck to you with the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2017
    Thank you for your review and good luck wishes. I am enjoying writing poems very much.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks about Christmas Stolen bread, how patiently and keenly it is prepared and baked to enjoy in the Christmas celebration, preparatory vision is so enjoyable; I like. DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Thank you for this review! It was such a fun challenge for me.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Wow! I could smell the spice and the warm bake oozing from your words, all I want to do now is eat a piece of this special cake! This is my favourite cake of the season and we have it in the shops but baking your own must taste so wonderful, a great poem to make the mouth water, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017


reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017
    Yes, I have made it every Christmas for many years and I am sure this year will be no exception, haha! It is delicious and makes for great gifts for neighbors and close friends. Great with coffee or tea! Thank you for this lovely review.