haiku (zebra in black and white}
contest called for animal haiku2 total reviews
Comment from Poetic Friend
Wow, this is very expressive. In it is brevity, you managed to provide double meanings/interpretations, in particularly the last line. I like the play on words. Great word economy and choices. The personification and imagery were nicely stitched as well.
This poem should do well in the contest. Good luck.
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Wow, this is very expressive. In it is brevity, you managed to provide double meanings/interpretations, in particularly the last line. I like the play on words. Great word economy and choices. The personification and imagery were nicely stitched as well.
This poem should do well in the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 06-Dec-2017
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These creatures never cease to amaze me and lets hope we don't lose them to extinction. A warm and loving nature write, really enjoyed, best wishes, love Dolly x
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These creatures never cease to amaze me and lets hope we don't lose them to extinction. A warm and loving nature write, really enjoyed, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Dec-2017
